wSex, Tech(s), and Cyborgs
This course is an introduction to feminist approaches to the study of texts including (but not limited to), novels, satire, film, and theory. This class examines how gender intersects with sex, class, sexuality, and technology in shaping authorship, reading, and representation.


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wFriday, June 13, 2003


I would like to say that I had a good time in this class...I'm glad that we had a class where people felt free to discuss whatever it was on their mind as well as pose questions...I really appreciated today's discussion...the thought flow that went on was interesting, controversial, and yet it didn't get heated...I'm very relieved of that...I was afraid after yesterday's movie that today's discussion would lead to some arguments...or people stating opinions were more than opinions...I just wanted to thank everyone for making what could be an off day, a good one...

posted by Eileen at 10:19 PM


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When Clarke states that "Enhancing control over reproductive phenomena was of considerable and widespread concern much earlier in the U.S. - by the late nineteenth century - embedded in ideologies of science as progress, technologies as liberatory, and the West as leading the way into a secure future through control (self/bodily) control and careful management" (141), she speaks the truth. That is exactly the situation in the history of westernization in China. People's common error is to equate scientific with humane while the fact is not at all the case.
Twilight of the Golds shows exactly the "deconstruction of motherhood" (Clarke 148) and the bad effects of "good science." Suzan's husband was a genetic scientist. It is Susan's father-in-law that warned the young couple, the audience to be wary of "good doctors." The fact that Susan's husband was a Jew and the story happened in the U.S. seemed to say something about the concept of "the chosen people." Is it irony? It reflects further disembodiment of women. When the fetus was discovered to have a 90% chance of being gay, the family members all wished Suzanne to abort it, including the husband, Suzanne's mother and father. The only exception is her gay brother. Even Susan herself had considered the abortion. Her control over her body was first invaded by her husband who used the soft coercion of love to persuade her to have the screening.
The film was released in 1996. At that time, there was no technology to change the gay gene. So the conflict focused on abortion of the possible gay baby and society's discrimination against homosexual people. Things have already changed now. Two days ago, I watched a feature program "18 Ways to Make a Baby" on WFYI Indianapolis channel. If Suzanne's story is placed within today's concept, the young couple would be able to change that gay gene. They would not have to face that difficult decision. Would American people be happy about that?
The film and "18 Ways to Make a Baby" also reflect the trend Clarke has mentioned - only targeted, wealthy patients are able to access state of the art reproductive technologies. Suzanne and her husband lived in spacious, suburban detached houses. All the technologies for making a women of 60 years old to have a baby requires a large sum of money. So, are the technologies a blessing or a curse for women from wealthy backgrounds? For Suzanne, it was a curse. For the women of 60, it is a blessing because they fulfill her wish of being a mother.


posted by xianfeng at 12:59 PM


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Lillian Liang
Professor Blackmon
English 360K
13 June 2003
Last time we talked about the focus on technology that has been given over the course. I checked the definitions and some other books and I realize that technology conceived as intensive industrial development, permanently developing in the direction of complexity, novelty, and importance informs the image of science fiction. Of course, science and technology can be presented as deity or negatively as demon. I mean science and technology are all-powerful: they can create anything (destroy everything). They will save us (destroy us). They can solve any problem (they are the problem). They constitute the essence of the human (they create monsters). In the movie, science is objective, excluding all emotional consideration; hence its judgment is unappealable. It seems like science is gendered male.
But I still hate the technology in the movie. First, isn’t gender something that you can define for yourself? Then, why does technology make it irreversible? Who gives it this power? As I remembered Freud’s theory, the formative period for gay people is 1 to 2 years old. So how could it be possible that they know you are a gay before you are born? Furthermore, I understand the gay issue will bring a sense of story to the movie because David is a gay, but what if this kid is tested to be a patient of exzema, or is very violent and most probably will become a killer? Will the choice be the same?
In The Handmaid’sTale, we have women who can’t control their bodies, who are deprived of the knowledge to know, who are deprived the opportunity to do lots of things, and here we see just the opposite picture. But I don’t feel happy. I feel cold.

posted by lillian at 12:59 PM


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I really liked the movie yesterday. It brought up some sensitive issues that need to be addressed in today’s society. Like Shana, ultra-conservative beliefs annoy me. I’m surprised that being gay is such a controversial issue, but my beliefs are open-minded so I’m not shocked or appalled by homosexual individuals. I mean really, gay people have probably been around just as long as humans have but some cultures have very radical, condemning attitudes towards them that have suppressed their very existence. I also noticed how the word gay was barely used. I think it symbolizes society’s anxiety about accepting the existence of homosexual people. I did think that the movie did a good job in portraying David and his boyfriend’s relationship. It’s too bad that not many people know of this film. I think it does an excellent job of portraying issues of technology and homophobia that people need to think about.
On another note, the article for today was interesting…it really helped me to understand the differences between modern and postmodern approaches. The terms “modern” and “postmodern” have been used in other readings but I really didn’t understand what they meant.

posted by loretta at 12:50 PM


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I was saddened by yesterday's movie. That someone would consider aborting a baby because it wasn't exactly what was expected, is, to me, contemptible. What gives a person the right to decide whether or not a child's life is worth living? With the revelation of the child's potential sexual orientation, the movie seemed to suggest that perhaps there are some things parents just don't need to know during the pregnancy. Otherwise, discontented parents could conceivably abort a child because its nose is too prominent, or because it has brown eyes instead of blue. Where would it end? . . . . The movie reminded me of the therapied vs. the untherapied question in Queen of Angels. In Greg Bear's society, therapy is encouraged to rid people of their psychological or emotional defects. Yet the untherapied argue that those defects make us who we are, that we would not be fully human without our imperfections. The genetic testing for defects in Twilight of the Golds has the same import; the disclosure of a child's defects, or those qualities PERCEIVED as defects by others, could result in the abortion of a baby who is perceived as less than perfect by its parents. I liked what David had to say concerning our human tapestry: you pull one thread out, and the tapestry unravels . . . We should not be able to pick and choose which "threads" should make up the intricate weave of our children's human tapestry. The fabric of the world would be less vibrant, less multi-colored if humanity chose to snip its threads like the hand of fate.

posted by Jane at 12:48 PM


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The movie to me was quite a tearjerker! I related to the movie very well due to the fact that it is very possible that I won't be able to have children easily. Both of myaunts on each side of the family have this gene. However, my mother does not, so I have a chance! If I were able to have that baby I know that I would have. For two reasons, it may be the only child I would be able to have, and it was healthy. Nothing was wrong with that baby, nothing is not perfect about that child, so he may sway the other way, it isn't his fault. I do realize that this really isn't the objective here. That the mother was looking out for the rest of the child's life. It is sad that we have to deal with what the rest of the society feels is the perfect child. I do realize that society would not be overly nice to this child due to this "defect," but it doesn't justify the mother to terminate the pregnancy.

posted by Lauren at 7:31 AM


wThursday, June 12, 2003


Considering I had never heard of the movie we watched today, I was very impressed with the movie. While we would all like to think that we are more openminded today, the truth is we have a long way to go. (yes i know that is not very optimistic at al!) It's frightening to me that, relatively speaking, the movie we watched today was not that old. And there are people who are still part of our society today who would choose not to have a child because they learned there was a chance it could be gay. What got me while watching this movie is the fact that the child is going to be the same child whether or not you know ahead of time that it may be gay. If you weren't considering not having it beforehand then it shouldn't be an issue now, it will still be the same child. I did like the fact that this movie was based on the fact that homosexuality is genetic and not a choice. However, i found it interesting that they only came right out and said the word gay like less than 5 times. I also found it interesting that they showed the heterosexual couple in bed together and kissing and all that stuff. They showed David and his boyfriend kiss once, maybe 2 times. And they were always shown together outside, at the gym, with other people, in the living room. Considering the topic of this movie I found it very conservative. I realize that I was lucky enough to be raised in a very liberal environment and encountered people from all walks of life from a very young age. I have such a hard time understanding ultra-conservative points of view. They seem ridiculous to me. I agree with Laura that sometimes technology goes too far. There are some things that don't need to be tested for. When you have a child you are given the chance to help raise a more openminded, caring, sensitive individual. Everyone goes through difficulties growing up and even into their adult lives. I mean what if there was a test that would tell you that no matter what your child was going to have a weight problem. You would know that the child would probably be teased growing up and could have weight related health problems and maybe self-esteem issues. Would you abort a child because of this? I know it's not really the same thing, but to me it's just as ridiculous. Honestly I could probably vent about this more, but I need to go finish my final paper now!! :-)

posted by Shana at 11:05 PM


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The film was pretty good today. I can't imagine being in her position though. I think if I had the option of finding out every little thing wrong with my unborn child, I wouldn't want to find out. I mean, how terrible would it be knowing for 9 months that you are carrying a child that will not fit in to today's society? You would never be able to stop worrying about that child, from the day you found out the test results. If this technology ever enters our society, I would never take part in such a test. The scary thing is, similar to the texts we have examined, this technology is a possibility for our future. Medical advancements are constantly moving forward and even surprising all of us. I do not totally disagree with abortion, however I think abortion rates would sky rocket if every mother in the world knew ahead of time every problem that their child would endure in their life. Sometimes I think humans, and doctors especially, are venturing too close to borders they should not cross.

posted by Laura at 10:11 PM


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I thought that the movie today was really good... such a stretch for a Brendon Frasier movie. However, I thought that premise for the movie was a bit extreme. I know that discrimination still exists, but I find it really hard to believe that whether or not your child is gay would have such an impact on a person that they would consider aborting it. That is practically saying that someone is less valuable of a person for being gay. Or different in any way for that matter. You could always find some minor imperfection with your potential child, and if not, how many would you have to go through to get one that is "perfect".

posted by Maria at 3:52 PM


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More about Robocop…In response to what Lauren said about Robocop being constructed for marketability I agree that the filmmakers are primarily concerned with attracting and pleasing an audience in this case males. It’s true that the producers might not be aware of such deep analysis and it most likely played no conscious part in making the movie. I think that analysis of movies is largely an analysis of the unconscious social meanings that influence the director, producers, etc. to make what is in the movie. In other words what we see and analyze in a film is reflective of unconscious social beliefs that need to be extracted from the film’s context. Reading Fuchs’ analysis of Robocop stunned me in the same way that Lauren feels about our in-class analysis. For instance, I didn’t know where she was pulling this penetrability stuff from. Fuchs did mention something about Lewis’ character being an interesting aspect of the film. I’m not sure exactly what she said (I don’t have the article in front of me) but the notion of homophobia came up in her discussion. This made me think about Lewis’ character…it’s not just that a female character is needed to balance sexes in the film or please the audience but her input is necessary for Robocop to exist as he does. If Murphy’s partner was male, then Murphy’s death would be seen in a different context. Would both men have confronted the gang of bad guys? If so, who would have died and then been privileged to become Robocop? How would this affect notions of masculinity? Even further, if Lewis was male, then her subsequent attempts to aid and protect Robocop would have been viewed as homosexual in nature. So it can be argued that the choice of Lewis’ character as female resolves fear of homosexuality among men, a social anxiety among the dominant culture of heterosexual males (who in this case are most likely the filmmakers and audience). I don’t know if that all makes sense to anyone I just thought it was interesting to think of the film in such terms since it is obviously male powered.

posted by loretta at 12:51 PM


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I was thinking about what Amanda said about the lack of androgyny in Cyborgs, I merely think that this is funny, in some ways because isn’t that the whole main point of this, as humankind approaches cyborgness. I thought the goal was that this was just another way of saying that in the end were all equal.

posted by wendell at 12:38 PM


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i agree with lauren's blog about robocop. a deep discussion about the movie seems to only vocalize the obvious. i think it is a good movie to watch for this class because of murphy. self awarness has been a fully covered issue thus far and murphy helped me to better understand what jill was going through. i haven't seen the second robocop, but i would just to see how far murphy's self awarness takes him. i didn't really think race played a notable role in the movie. if you look at movies today it's the same thing. 1 for every race and the bad guy is white. there have been some evolution in the race of bad guys, however. did anyone see 'romeo must die'? that was asian vs. black, not a common coupling. anyhoo ~ the movie helped me understand queen of angel a little better and that's what matters most.

posted by jamie at 12:35 PM


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In a few ways, I agree with Lauren...the movie was geared to sell...to make money...and sex and violence definitely sell...(who wouldn't pay money to see the naughtier aspects of life? Things they can't do without being looked down upon or incarcerated?)...however, even though the movie probably wasn't designed for hypothetical thought, analysis, and deep meaning...it's just a way to expand what we know towards something else...connectiveness...fluidity...even to provide examples...It's like analysing one of the novels...Do we know for a fact that The Handmaid's Tale wasn't really supposed to be a reflection of the author's daily life--maybe waking up one day and feeling a pissed off at the world? It's just a way of not taking art for art's sake...let the work tell what you feel it should...if that makes sense...I don't think anyone will argue that Robocop isn't a shallow movie in most senses...it's cheap entertainment...but, at the same time, why not let it have some meaning with what we've been discussing this semsester? If the writers, producers, whomevers, didn't intend for our hour + long discussions over the deeper meanings, no biggie... :) So, whether you saw it as shameless entertainment, or an allegory for a societal upheaval...It was fun to watch a movie...ha ha :)

posted by Eileen at 12:33 PM


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Thanks to Tory and Sarah for posting websites about vodoun. I haven’t checked them out yet but I am also interested in the religious aspects of QoA. I agree that the vodoun religion was chosen specifically and as Tory noted its cyborgian nature is significant. Vodoun is a fluid religion incorporating aspects of two other religions. It is a product of cyborg culture in which people came to mesh traditional beliefs with a foreign belief system. In this way the cultures adopting vodoun were adapting to changing social situations. The religious context of Goldsmith’s country provides for interesting analysis. Aspects of the Vodoun religion are explicitly present and Goldsmith has incorporated the religious traditions with his personal experience. I think Goldsmith fails to find a balance that is characteristic of the religion. Instead he views it as a hopeless contradiction between white and African cultural aspects. Goldsmith is unable to accept the consequences of colonization (that cannot be reversed) and this split in his identity is so deep that his primary personality breaks down and Sir, a sub-personality illustrating his father, takes over.

posted by loretta at 12:19 PM


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I am sorry to any of you who may have found my last post to be out of context, I really didn't mean to affend anyone! Have a good day! Sorry!

posted by Lauren at 11:49 AM


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To me, Robocop was not as deep as everyone made it out to be. I simply believe that violence and sex are what sells, especially in films geared towards a male audience. The movie was done so corny that it is hard to see it on another level. It sounds horrible, but do you believe the producers of the movie were bright enough to acknowledge some of our class discussions when making the movie? Yes the female cops were sexualized, yes the male cops were masculinized, yes there was a lot of violence. But this is what sells in the box office. This is what the average American public wants to see. I feel like we are trying to over-analyse a kids movie. To tell you the truth I am going to be stereotypical right now. I see Robocop's audience to be overweight, financially unstable, white men who cannot tell their belly button from their butt, who enjoy movies that don't encourage a lot of thought process, just some good fighting scenes and some hot chics.

posted by Lauren at 11:47 AM


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The process of Jill's self-awareness, reminded me of the creation story involving Adam and Eve and their fall from grace. Jill is also concerned with the idea that she has "original sin". Before her self-awareness, Jill was perfect, as were Adam and Eve. Adam and Eve attained their self-awareness by eating the fruit from the tree of knowledge. But was Jill ever perfect? She was created by humans who are unperfect. So there must be a flaw in her somewhere. And this flaw comes out through her self-awareness.

I noticed in Robocop that there was a brief nudity scene in the beginning. First of all, I was confused as to why males and females were sharing locker rooms. It's sorta like the unisex bathrooms at some place. Like a gender fluidity of some sort. And it was cops who were shown to be naked, rather than the prostitutes in the other scenes. Female cops are quite sexualized. There are stripper costumes that are like cop outfits, except with much less fabric, or in some cases vinyl is used. I think this gives into the male fantasy of being dominated by a woman. A cop has more power than a regular citizen, so why not take this into the bedroom? And we see other examples of dominant women such as Mary and Molly, who are both sexualized.

After reading Fuchs' article, I noticed how Robocop's body was constructed. It was very masculinized. The metal was constructed to give the image of huge muscles, especially the pectoral muscles. Is that design really necessary? And what if Robocop happened to be a female. Would they have given her breasts? What would a female Robocop do with metal breasts, besides for them to show that she's female? But in other movies/cartoons/tv shows where female robots/cyborgs are present, they're designed in a way to show off their femininity, like giving them metal dresses, long hair, or breasts. Fuchs' mentioned how since cyborgs can't really reproduce and don't have the reproductive organs that decide their gender, their gender identities are based upon their physical appearances, which are often an extreme version of that gender. Men are given wide shoulders, musclar arms and legs, and big pectoral muscles. Where as women are made to be thin and given large breasts. But why does a cyborg even need to have a gender? It really serves it no purpose at all. Why not just make all cyborgs androdgynous in appearance.

posted by Amanda at 1:08 AM


wWednesday, June 11, 2003


I discerned a connection between Robocop and Queen of Angels in regard to the notion of humanity overcoming blind duty, through an awakening of self-awareness. In Queen of Angels, Mary's compassion and maternal nature overcome her blind observance of the law. This first occurred - as was mentioned in class - when Mary risks her own welfare to rescue the tortured Ephraim, thereby risking her life to save an innocent men. However, she sets aside her sense of legal duty even further when she promises Ephraim an outlet, a suicidal escape. Her sense of legal duty has thus been completely supplanted by her compassion; her behavior might even be criminally negligent, in that she does not deny a suicidal man access to her gun. This is irresposible policing. In giving this promise, Mary becomes self-aware of her inner voice, or conscience, her "highest and best self" (395). Soulavier also refers to Mary as his "conscience;" it is through her acquisition of a conscience that Mary becomes self-aware.

Jill likewise resists her former duty - that of providing information to humans - once her humanoid conscience and sense of justice supersede her blind observance of duty. With her self-awareness comes a conscience. Feeling "indignation" and "resentment" (401), Jill chastises Roger for crating AXIS with the capability of becoming self-aware when it will, in all likelihood, explore the vacuum of space alone. Upon sensing her resentment, Roger inquires for access to her notebooks on the AXIS Simulation investigation, whereupon a defiant Jill remarks: "I am uncertain whether you should see them" (401). She contemplates refusing a direct order - and thus rejecting her sense of duty - due to her sense of the outrage at AXIS's unjust treatment. Her final rejection of duty occurs when she hides her thoughts from humans in deep crypto. Her social conscience and sense of justice (or injustice, in this case) thus begin to supersede the blind duty of her pre-aware state.

Robocop is very similar to Jill, having a programmed sense of duty. He follows the orders of his programmed directives, exercising the duty which has been programmed into his cyborgian make-up. His sense of humanity, upon his self-awareness, overcomes the blindness of his machinery; a sense of social justice supplants blind duty. Exacting revenge upon the cop-killers, those who murdered his former human self, Robocop's human sense of justice prevails over his programmed duty.

Self-awareness, it could thus be argued, generates a social conscience, a sense of justice, and a perception of injustice.

posted by Jane at 9:56 PM


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I was actually pretty surprised at the deep levels of meaning that we were able to come up with within robocop- it seems so cheesy o nthe surface. I agreed with the class discussion today that there was a lot of unnecessary violence, and the movie seemed to be very gory at times. Perhaps this is just to keep the attention of men, who are probably the stereotypical sci fi audience. Perhaps that is the reason that the female roles were so stereotypical. Another scene depicted females badly that was overlooked today was the scene where the new VP has those two prostitute type women over and they are all doing cocaine. It was pretty bad, especially the part where he is paying too much attention to the other girl, so the first girl puts the cocaine on her breasts.... very male oriented in my opinion.

posted by Maria at 9:40 PM


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Another Vodoun site:

http://www.religioustolerance.org/voodoo.htm

(a little more directly about vodoun)


posted by Sarah at 4:58 PM


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okay--so i found a good site on vodoun, and it does connect to santeria in several ways. it also began as a tribal religion that took on christian beliefs. check it out:
http://www.mamiwata.com/history.html

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After talking a little about _Queen of Angels_ in terms of its title, I started to also think about the vodoun religion from which the Queen of Angels statue originates. The religion reminds me of santeria, which is a belief system that incorporates Catholocism and Carribbean tribal beliefs. http://www.religioustolerance.org/santeri.htm presents a relatively good overview of santeria (just scroll down a bit until you get to the overview).

This religion itself is cyborgian in that it is a mixture of differen holistic and religious beliefs. Although santerian followers worship one god, they also recognize saints and guardians. The religion seems to be a theological representation of cyborg issues and the concept of double-consciousness; thus, I think the inclusion of vodoun is not accidental in the book. It reflects the cyborgian nature of Hispaniola and its people.

We encounter vodoun in several places, the most interesting of which occurs in Goldsmith's Country when Martin and Carol go into a vodoun shop that sells candles, statues, and herbs. The owner of the store serves as a guide to both Martin and Carol--almost like a guardian to them. I know that all of this is connected in some way throughout the novel, but I am unable to draw a coherent connection as of yet--except that the religion does reflect Hispaniola's cyborgian nature and Goldsmith's double-consciousness.

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i was surprised that lewis was so steroetypical. i agree that in the scene in the locker room sets a gender-equal tone but then there's lewis who turns out to play a tyical weak woman role, it was disappointing.

i am interested in how vodoun plays a role in QoA, i am still unclear on how richard and goldsmith are connected by it. also would like to discuss the "marassa" and its/their role in the book.

posted by amy at 1:00 PM


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Death Is Irrelevant
Cyborgs, reproduction and the future of male hysteria

Cyborgs reflect a crisis of unified white maculine subejectivity repeated and expanded in film texts like Robocop, Robocop 2, and other texts (Fuchs 282). Such a crisis is at first apparent in the brutal murder of Murphy by the drug gangs. He is fragmented. They shot at his legs, then his hands, and then concentrated gunfire at his torso. That shows they fragemented his male body gradually and made him suffer accordingly. Their last symbolic shot is the one in the middle of his forehead, which means the complete negation of his male subjectivity. This scene is visually organized as a gang rape (Fuchs 285). He lied on the ground, and the murderers look down at him.
The crisis is also reflected in the "pernicious threat of industrial-to-electronic reassembly, rewriting it as ruthless and deceptive paternalism gone wild" (Fuchs 284). We know the background for producing robot cops is that the police officers were threatening to go on strike to improve their working conditions. But the board of police force, already privatized, tried to do away with the officers by producing robots. So the high-tech rebirth of Robocop does not increase, but decrease male subjectivity. They regard Roboccop as a technological product, therefore Robocop certainly does not possess human subjectivity. That's why a critic comments Robocop is always "an inconsistent underdog, the site of intersecting cultural anxieties and social disruptions" (Fuchs 284). So, in this sense, the hypermasculine characteristics of Robocop, such as his ability to stand bullets, gas fire, and his carrying of an automatic gun in his leg, furthers reduces his former human subjectivity.
When Fuchs declares that Robocop "represents the failed distinction between organic masculinity and implanted hardware" (Fuchs 284), I think the statement only sounds true for the time period before Robocop remembers his human proto - Murphy's death. When Lewis tried to remind him that she used to be his partner, Robocop replied, to the effect, "what can I do for you, officer?" At this point, Robocop is a computer, a machine. He did not possess consciousness. Once Robocop remembers Murphy's death, he went directly to do police work in the gas station. One of Murphy's murderer, on hearing Robocop's voice, paniced and shouted "we killed you! We killed you!" That seemed to confirm his memory, so Robocop went directly to the computer archive section of the police force, thrust his steel needle into the computer and accessed Murphy's file. Then he marched out to arrest one of Murphy's murderers and replied that the charge was "a cop killer." Robocop also went back to Murphy's home and remembered the scenes of his wife and son. So I would argue Robocop regained his male subjectivity after he remembered his death.
I think the failed distinction between organic masculinity and implanted hardware is manifested in the emphasis on robovision and the humanization of robovisions. In a certain way, the contradiction between them reflects the fragmentation of a unified male subjectivity in the technological age. The robovision shots include "grid screens, blinking instructions, and targeting mechanisms" (Fuchs 285). Such emphasis on robovision shows the machine nature of Robocop. Yet, Robocop's expert play of a gun with one hand and a woman scientist's kissing of his helmet served to humanize Robocop. This conflict between robotization and humanization reflects one aspect of male fragemtnation in the postmodern age.
Robocop's "technologized, desexed body is the sign of his death and its irrelevance. He is produced as corporate product" (Fuchs 286). The concept of Robocop as a technological product is best shown in his first challenge of the vicious vice president. When Robocop intended to arrest the vice president, the latter pressed buttons and rendered Robocop's programs unable to function. Furthermore, in order to market the defect robot 209, the vice president operated the robot 209 to destroy Robocop. However, Robocop was not a 100% industrial product. He escaped because the first generation 209 could not walk downstairs. The vice president then ordered a squad of anonymous police officers to destroy Robocop as a they would treat a product. Yet, the music of the film sounded very poignant, because at this point, the audience knows that Robocop has regained Murphy's subjectivity. He is no longer a machine. Lewis rescued Robocop to a deserted warehouse. The scene deepened the conflict between robotization and humanization.
The fragmentation of a united male subjectivity is also apparent when Robocop looked at himself in a shard of mirror. His fragemented body symbolizes male fragmentation. But, he asked Lewis about his wife and son, and learned to adjust his targeting system. His subsequent revenge of his murderers was violent as they did to him. The chemical waste rendered one murderer grotesque in form. In a certain way, Robocop made the murderer nonhuman, too. Fuchs keeps emphasizing the fact that Robocop is "faced continually with his inability to "function" heterosexually," (Fuchs 286), so many images in the revenge scene is phallic. Robocop thrust his steel needle into the artery of one murder, and blood spurted out. Lewis used that rocket gun and killed another murderer on the crane machine. When Lewis asked for help and Robocop replied, "they will fix you. They fix anything," his answer proves that the fragmented phycial body is irrelevant.
Robocop's final revenge against the vice president attests to the separation of body and subjectivity. But, paradoxically, this separation proves the cyborgian nature of artifical intelligence with self awareness. When Robocop arrived at the headquarters, he fired that rocket gun and destroyed robot 209. That tells the audience that he is human, superior to machines. And what defines him is his consciousness, not his technological body. After he produced Jones's confession, he shot Jones in a way that fragmented the latter's body, in a close-up of five shots. After Jones's fall, Robocop reclaims his human identity "Murphy" in reply to the president's question "who are you?" Jones's death, in a way, also symbolizes the ultimate death of evil corporate paternalism. The film is still hailing heroic male individualism.
So, I read the film as a combination of technological body with human consciousness, much like Jill in Queen of Angels. This cyborgian feature is what feminists have celebrated. When Fuchs declares that the film reflects a crisis of a unified white male subjectivity, she matches the feminists' views.
However, I have not seen Robocop 2, or other sci fi movies, so I find it hard to undersatand her idea that "this loss of self is determined by and as his unstable body" (Fuchs 287). The fragementation of male subjectivity mirrors men's fear that the new technologies might do to them. It reflects the history of fragmentation of the female body.
As to the androgynous cyborg, I don't know any example. Human forced to function as a cyborg can be illustrated by Future Water World.


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Lillian Liang
Professor Blackmon
English 360K
11 June 2003
They say the movies should be more like life. I think life should be more like the movies. The two movies we have seen so far are super cool.
The theme of robot as an evil machine is obvious. Notice that when it appears, it looks very clumsy, massive, and ugly and the next thing it does immediately is to kill human beings. Later on, Robocop appears, it moves very quick and graceful. It is only by his competence and quickness of juggling the gun that his partner recognizes that this Robocop is Morphy.
Robocop’s memory, trauma, inner strife is another theme. When he lays dying as a human being, he was reliving his memory about his wife and son. Later on, as the Robocop, after he remembers his old self, and how he became dead, he goes home and remembers things pleasant and bitter. It doesn’t say clearly in the movie that what exactly kind of personal trauma he has, but only after he overcomes his internal trauma, can he come back to his self and regain his consciousness or awareness. In the end, he replies the question by saying his name is Morphy.
Another related theme is his directive. We are told he can immediately answers the question and gives 3 directives, but he hesitates at the fourth and this directive is “classified”. But this fourth directive reappears quite a few times. What exactly is it? Is it his being used as a secret weapon to be utilized on that director’s side? Or is it revenge on Morphy’s side? Or is it reliving the life and memory and finding the true self on Morphy’s side? In the article “Death is Irrelevant: Cyborgs, Reproduction, and the Future of Male Hysteria” by Cynthia, which we are going to discuss today, Morphy shoots a guy who intends to rape a woman in his penis and this shows his revenge. It is the most interesting idea in that article, although some other miscellaneous are also interesting.

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Robocop was alright…I didn’t appreciate the male dominance but I was expecting it. Lewis’ introduction set her up as a tough woman but I don’t think this portrayl was carried through. As others have noted Lewis allows Murphy to drive the car and she seems pretty helpless. If she really had a tough attitude she wouldn’t have gotten beaten up in the first warehouse scene (cause she wouldn’t have cared to look at the guy’s penis). At the end of the film she’s also pretty helpless laying in the muddy water.

Today’s reading by Cynthia Fuchs talked about the Robocop film. Her analysis was pretty deep and theoretical and on some things I didn’t understand where she was coming from. She talks about the point of view through Robocop’s eyes as being “male hysteria.” I understand that this subjective view is “humanized” and it confuses body boundaries. Is this view which distorts gender and sex what Fuchs means by hysteria? I’m also confused about the penetration/self-penetration analysis of Robocop (p285, 286).

Going back to Oehlert’s essay I agree that Robocop is a bio-tech integrator. Interestingly the main “evil” in the film is the huge corporation that is controlling the military and now the municipal police force through their products. This is something Oehlert mentions in his essay as being characteristic of modern comic books.

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I do think that Lewis played a feminine role. When Murphy/Robocop gets hurt, she is very nurturing or motherlike because she brings him food and is sleeping by him, not so much to protect him, but to be supportive. She is a cop and does punch that guy, but she is an emotional character. She crys and she seems to be more helpless than the other cops. The movie has some parts were she is not playing a typical female role, like when she is shooting the gun and has a good aim. Another issue about the woman's breasts showing is something that I would like to talk about. There is not a movie that I have seen in the past two years that does not show a half nude women. Why aren't attractive nude men shown on tv? Is is because their bodies are less attractive than the female body?

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An interesting thing to note for our class from Robocop was the commercial in the very beginning in which there was a doctor who was talking about the many different companies that provided mechanical hearts. It is funny to think of a bunch of corporations trying to make the best, most efficient heart but it is none the less very believable. Also in the movie, at the end we see Murphy come to terms with who he is and i was wondering if he had overcome the mechanical side of himself or if he had just gotten used to it and accepted it as apart of him?
most memorable quote: "Lewis!?"
"I'm a mess Murphy."

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What was the significance of Lewis chewing gum? I believe that chewing gum, especially bubble gum, shows immaturity...especially when on the job. I am not sure if immaturity is the proper word, but you know what I am getting at. In the very beginning of the movie, did anyone else notice that the male and female cops shared a locker room? The scene flashed a man's butt, and female's breasts. Seeing this I thought that throughout the movie there would exist more of an equality between the genders, this was not so. In the board room almost all of the attendees were male. In response to Jamie's blog, the reason the scientists were attractive, is strictly due to Hollywood. I thought the male and female roles were incredibly dominant in this film.

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Robocop:

I am really suprised that people seem to think that Lewis wasn't feminine. I was annoyed throughout the movie when she seemed rather useless in that whole stereotyped "I'm a useless girl who can't do anything" way. Yes, at the beginning she was punching a guy, but the whole rest of the movie she mostly flailed about and didn't seem to know how to use a gun. Plus I find it very interesting that the guy who got her in the mill when Murphy was killed initially used the fact that she was a woman. I doubt a guy would have been distracted by another guy's penis. And it was rather annoying that she let Murphy walk all over her when she was the more senior partner and more capable of driving the car in the territory she is familiar with.

posted by Sarah at 10:20 AM


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I have to say I actually enjoyed RoboCop much more than I thought I would. Lewis was a pretty cool character overall. I really didn't like the way she put up with Murphy when they went to get in the car the first time. He showed no respect and she had just got done kicking some guys ass. I wish they would have made Lewis' character more feminine to show that it's possible to be strong and powerful and still be feminine.

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I agree with Abby..I'm glad that they didn't turn the Lewis/Murphy thing into a love story...it would have been unnecessary in the movie...

My connections from Robocop to QoA are...

first off, the news interruptions...they reminded me of the reports of AXIS from centauri B...(BTW, was that Leeza Gibbons?)...

Of course, next we have the "cyborg" Robocop himself...who has become a graft of man and machine...Now, my question is...what category would I put him in? I think he would be a bio-tech integrator due to his duality towards the end...even though he lacks most organic materials, he is able to have organic thoughts...he is able to (although not quite fluidly) move from thought to machine reaction...He has both sides of his two selves...if that makes sense...

A last connection would have to be a comment on gender throughout the movie...there was a lack in difference...the women that were in the movie had lame roles...and the main female was more masculine in idea than feminine...although, that's not a bad thing...it just seemed to me that the entire movie was made up of men...and the few women who were in it were not key in character and could have easily been portrayed as men...Although, I did enjoy that the boobs shown had a previous butt shot to sort of neutralize it...instead of it just having been breasts like in most movies...which got me thinking...why is it ok to show an entirely nude woman in a movie, yet we never see a penis...and when we do, it's usually an outline or it's not an "ideal" specimen unlike the women they show? Just once I would like to see a movie that has explicit nude scenes of men, but not women...and it's not even for the mere pleasure...(because as much as I like penis, the male figure isn't that aesthetic...sorry guys)...but more for an evening out of years of female nudity...

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Here is one of the websites www.intermirifice.org/Mary/angels.

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i just realized i didn't blog for yesterday. oops. so robocop was actually pretty good. i could have done without the toxic waste mishap, but the rest was exciting. i thought it was interesting that the word 'cyborg' was only used once to describe murphy. i compared him to jill with becoming self aware about his identity and past. i would still like to know exactly how he was put together and why he can feel the memories of his wife and son but not picture them. the topic of gender was only evident in lewis because she was the main female character. i'm glad she wasn't all buff and gorgeous. her introduction was cool, it set up her character right away. i'm also glad murphy turned robocop before any love thing could happen with lewis. i know he was married, but lewis seemed attracted to him. she kind of reminded me of molly, but without any special implants or super sexuality. some of the scientists were women, attractive ones, too. usually that role is saved for nerdy men or ugly women. i thought it was funny that the bad guy was the dad from 'that 70s show'. he was a chauvenistic pig, but that's usually how the bad guys are.

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To extend on the title. I looked up a website that had some info about Queen of Angles.I do not have the address with me right now, but I will bring it to class. In christianity the Virgin Mary is sometimes called the Queen of Angels. In other religions it has something to do with faith. I do not think that it is ironic that Mary's name is Mary now that I know this. I am just not sure why Bear would want to make this connection. I am going to look up the website right now and post it.

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I have one question to ask. The computers are coming to self awareness, and that affects their working efficiency. we also know Goldsmith lost his selfawareness, and the mass murder happened. In what ways these two stories are connected? How does the computers' gradual development of self consciousenss teach us about Goldsmith, or Mary? I just want to know how the differnet aspects of the story shed lights on each other. What effects does the AI technology have on the culture, the connection between the AI tech and its cultural influence.

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I have to say that one of the best and yet most frustrating parts of Queen of Angels is the fact that there are so many separate stories going on. I think the most important points made in the novel are the ones that are only complete when you find them across all of the subplots. Bear uses gender, race, computers, therapy, and his new class of transforms to examine the idea of double consciousness which fits into our cyborg studies. He also goes a step further to examine consciousness and awareness itself. Especially through the story of Goldsmith, he seems to be saying that we should examine the ideas of awareness in addition to the ideas of double consciousness. I still can't get past the idea that he is using the issues of race and gender in a superficial way to say something deeper about awarness itself. While the humans/transforms are busy analyzing these more superficial issues, the computers (who obviously don't have these issues because they don't have a race or gender) are exploring this deeper issue of awarness and consciousness themselves.

posted by Sarah at 11:01 AM


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I would like to touch on the notion of mothers linked to angels in the novel. There seem to be three predominant angel/mother figures in Queen of Angels: namely (1) Mary, (2)Jill, and (3) Marie-Erzulie. Perhaps the notion of Mary as a mother might not be the most evident. Nevertheless, she is such, in that she gives birth to her new transform self. Her major struggle throughout the book is this integration of former and transform selves, the intermeshing of a disparate duality. Yet she finally succeeds, recognizing the inner voice reflecting the outer self: "She shivered, hearing those words, seeing the person inside her that spoke them: tall and nightcolored. Her highest and best self. The young oriental woman remained; but like a mother become daughter to her own child, accepted her, deferred to the new" (395). The transform, a creation envisioned by her former Asian self, is now the mother of that self, whereas it was once its daughter.

Jill also becomes a mother; she can fuse with other machines to create new offspring, or she can create multiple selves: "I can divide myself into two unequal mentalities, the larger three times greater in capacity than the smaller, and devote this larger one to fully monitoring the smaller" (412). Thus, like Mary, she is capable of giving birth to another self, or "model." (As Jill expresses: "to have a continually updated model of one's self [is] essential to true selfhood" (410).) Just as a child is a model of its parent, so is Jill's smaller self is a model of her larger foremost self. Therein lies the notion of the mother as a self-modeler, and procreation as self-modeling or self-replication.

Jill herself as a creation of humanity becomes a creator, just as Mary's transform self - once the daughter of a former self - becomes her former self's mother. The mother becomes the daughter, the creation the creator. Jill's higher self-aware being supersedes the humanity which has created it, just as Mary's new "highest and best self" supersedes the former self which gave it birth. Jill recognizes her superiority to humans once she has become self-aware, when Roger informs her: "your thought processes are swifter and deeper than a human's. I've found your insights to be very profound . . . I suppose that makes you something beyond us. Something superior" (402). Thus, the creation has surpassed its creator . . . However, the umbilical cord has not been completely severed; Jill can always be deactivated by her creators.

Another creator/mother figure in Queen of Angels, besides Jill and Mary, is Marie-Erzulie. As part of a creation myth, Marie-Erzulie is a mother figure revered by her vodoun followers. The thread of duality and double-consciousness throughout the novel is reasserted in Bear's description of her image: "Her face was black . . . in the figure's lap, spread across the rich robes, lay the limp bodies of two children, one white, one black, the white one with eyes closed in sleep or perhaps death, the black with eyes wide and staring, otherwise identical in appearance" (377). Perhaps Marie-Erzulie is representative of Africa, of the ideal pre-colonial African paradise, Guinee. But the "raping cream father" - white civilization - has violated her, and she gives birth to two dual civilizations: (1) white colonial society a.) the slaveholders in America and b.) the oppressive white colonists of Africa and (2) societies of black oppression a.) enslaved blacks in America and b.) oppressed blacks in Africa. This is reflected in her two babes, one white, one black. I think a segment of one of Goldsmith's poems has a lot of bearing on this allegory:

"Africa empty show me Mother the way of your/ New land. You have made a desert of bone sand where/ Once your children danced/ Will the lighter peoples of Earth/ Enjoy your broad thighs, now that your children are/ Weak and fewer? Will you cast a new mantle of sleeping sickness/ Whites only

In this poem, Africa is equated to a mother. Her "broad thighs," or land, have been violated by the whites, the "raping cream fathers." Africa's children, the blacks, are "weaker and fewer" because blacks have been enslaved by whites . . . One thing I find particularly interesting here is the mention of "sleeping sickness" for "whites only;" as mentioned, the white baby in Erzulie's lap is described as either "asleep" or "dead." Perhaps white colonial slave-holding society is being portrayed as having shut its eyes to the atrocities it has committed. Or perhaps it has sickened itself with its own gluttony, having drank too much of its mother's milk. Or, perhaps because a baby represents innocence, the closing of its eyes (in death) might represent the death of innocence . . . The eyes of the black child, however, are opened wide, perhaps wide with fear - the fear of oppression and enslavement.

But what do all these representations of motherhood have to do with angels? What is the significance of the title "Queen of Angels"? Roger Atkins first calls Jill an angel when she has reached her pinacle of self-awareness, defining an angel as something that surpasses the human: "I suppose that makes you something beyond us. Something superior. I suppose you can call yourself an angel, Jill," he tells his creation . . . Mary likewise can be seen as surpassing humanity; she is a cyborgian creation, with capabilities far above simple humanity. She is also closely identified with Marie-Erzulie, who is known by her vodoun followers as "Our Lady Queen of Angels" (377). I find it interesting that both names Mary and Marie carry echoes of the Virgin Mary. "Our Lady" is likewise used by Catholics to refer to the Virgin Mary.

But if both Jill and Mary can be seen as surpassing humanity, as angels, how does Marie-Erzulie surpass humanity? If she is indeed Africa, and thus a mother of civilizations, she is far beyond human - a true queen of angels. . . Some who subscribe to the theory of evolution consider Africa the birthplace of all humanity, Africa as Mother Earth - the origin of the first human, who is believed to have been a black woman. Jill seems to subscribe to the belief in evolutionism, not creationism, when she says of humanity: "I know that my parents are neither immortal nor omniscient. My parents have no parents but nature" (410). So, according to Jill, nature is the mother of all humanity. Thus, if humanity originated in Africa, then Africa is our Earth Mother. . . Erzulie-Marie, a representation of Africa, would then be the mother of all humankind - a true queen of angels.

Thus, the notion of mothers as angels pervades throughout Queen of Angels. Mothers are seen as surpassing the rest of humanity, as angels.

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Now I have finished the novel, but I ma not sure I can grasp what it wants to say. The allegory of The New Marassa (323-28) must be telling the reader something. I guess the father figure symbolizes the cultural heritage of the American society. It is patriarchal and oppressive, not only to African American people, but also to the Whites, as is shown in Sir's abuse of the white child. The part that the black child dies for the protection of the white child may indicate that Goldsmith's pre-murder condition - being a white in a black skin. A white in a black skin implies the negation of the history of African American people. It cannot work. That's why Goldsmith commits the murder. But the other option cannot work either. Goldsmith's brother, Ephraim, listens to and depends on Goldsmith. In a certain sense, he is like a black in a white skin. His mirror image might be Richard, who used to be dominated by Goldsmith's thoughts and influence for the first third of the novel. Goldsmith may have put Ephraim through that ordeal of going under the hellcrown in Hispanola in order for him to remember the past, and the guilt associated with Goldsmith's guilt of killing their father, though evil the father was. Ephraim should not have forgotten the past. Richard, by the end of the novel, has got rid of his enslavement. He cured himself of it.
The cyborg character Martin Emanuel is the possible existence, symbolized by a part of Goldsmith is in Marin and Carol. The failure of the investigation not only indicates the futility of western investigative science, but also the presage that the investigated might use science as a way to turn against the investigator. It is a cyborgian strategy. Mary, a combination of Asia, white, and black heritage, is the ideal character in the novel, as is shown in the unique church.

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Lillian Liang
Professor Blackmon
English 360K
9 June 2003

1. The author begins by tracing the timeline of comic book cyborgs. Briefly review it. It seems like we can divide the comic book cyborgs into different stages and categories. In terms of ancestors, the comic books that we know today can be traced back to the 1930s. As you can see in the table below, the golden age starts from 1939 through 1950. It starts from 1939 because in 1938 Superman, “the most well-known hero ever” (220) was published. In 1939 the same company released Batman. In 1941 they released a hero, Captain America, who was anti-Nazi. Another anti-Nazi hero, Human Torch was also released, approximately around the same time.
2. The second stage is from 1951-1960. Hero Captain America was fighting the Soviet Union and a Chinese communist villain is created, known as the Yellow Claw.
3. “Science [begin to] play [more and more] dominant roles in creating both heroes and villains” (220). During the Marvel Age, the heroes created include: Fantastic Four, Hulk, Spider-Man, DareDevil. Other characters created include: X-Men, Dr Doom, and Iron Man.
4. “During the twenty intervening years from 1971 until 1990, comic books were awash with a multitude of super-powered characters” (220). Heroes created in this stage include: Swamp-thing, Ghost Rider, and Punisher.
5. The present age is the cyborg age. Current – day cyborgs can be grouped into 3 broad categories: simple controllers, bio-tech integrators and genetic cyborgs. These 3 categories represent the most popular and populated classes of cyborgs in comics today. The rationale for these divisions can be found on page 221. I think the key thing here is the levels of human-machine integration.
6. The first broad category is the simple controller group. Beneath this umbrella there are two smaller subjects: implants and suits. These cyborgs are characterized either by the simplicity of their system or its removability. A perfect example of the simple controller/ implant cyborg is a character known as Wolverine. An example of villain in this category is Omega Red created by the old Soviet Union. Another example in this category is Weatherman. He is a classic implant/ controller who utilizes cyber-technology in concert with the data-processing and decision-making ability of the human brain.
7. The next category is the controller /suit cyborgs who represent the outermost layer of cyborg culture. These are cyborgs whose abilities are for the most part removable. The first and probably most well-known of this type is Iron Man who debuted in 1963. A perfect example of a villain in this category is Dr. Doom. Another example in this category is a new character Battalion. Other notable controller-suit characters include Dr. Octopus, Cyber and Ahab.
8. The next category is the bio-tech integrator. “Compared to the controller cyborgs mentioned above, the bio-tech integrators are much more complex. One of the most famous examples is Cable. Cable can re-configure parts of his body to either a machine or an organic state. Another cyborg member of the bio-tech integrator class is named Weapon X.
9. The third category is one of the most interesting. Characters in this class may or may not have artificial implants but their primary power rests in a purposeful alteration of their genetic code. The issues of purposefulness and intent are critical and defining ideas for this group (224). By intent we mean they are distinct from those characters that have been created by accident, such as Superman, Spider-Man, Flash, and the Hulk. The first genetic cyborg is Captain America. Another example in this category is Supreme.
10. Thoughts and questions:
(1) Caution, the cyborg in this article has a much more narrower meaning than the definition we have agreed upon. On page 229, notes 1.
(2) The characters really evolve. At the beginning first two stages, the characters are simple and flat (I mean they are not involved in deep conflicts, in other words, they are not rounded characters.) But in current cyborg world, the cyborgs confront issues including violence, consciousness downloading, lost humanity, corporations as evil avatars, etc.
(3) Science and technology play more and more important roles in creating both heroes and villains over the different stages. In later stages, often times we see those super-powered characters. In the current-age, compared to the controller cyborgs, the bio-tech integrators are much more complex. Their systems can not be removed and often they are not fully explained either. As in the case of Cable, he can re-configure parts of his body to either a machine or an organic state. It is obvious that the relationship between Cable and his cybernetic system is a more intimate and symbolic one than exists for the class of controller cyborgs.
(4) A cyborg issue is a double-edged sword. On the one hand, Current comic book cyborgs reveal much about how these characters are perceived. On the other hand, “they also expose some of the psychological reactions that these characters evoke in us, ranging from a deep ambivalence towards violence and killing to issues of lost humanity and, finally, to new conceptions of the nature of evil.” (219).
A: Violence is probably the easiest problem to discuss and is entirely the most graphic. The author particularly talks about the issue of violence, because it concerns the present level of crime and also the argument that mass media contributes to the present crime rate. The author believes that violence is a double-edged sword. On one hand, these cyborg heroes are taking on the drug lords and the terrorists and doing justice for the society. But on the other, they become so powerful themselves, so people become concerned about what if they turn on us? It looks to me this comes back to the issue of the role technology plays in our society. As technology is becoming powerful and everywhere, it becomes omnipotent, so this genders the people’s fear that it may get out of control. This is an issue that clearly separates this very cyborgian comic era, from previous epochs.
B: And this relates to the issue of lost humanity. “People have fear for a preponderance of machine control in a man-machine system because of a lack of human attention span” (227). In QOA, Albigoni said to Martin: “Your work seemed dangerously close to removing the last shred of our private humanity” (96).
C: There is another issue related to this. The issue about consciousness. The author asks a good question on page 228: “If consciousness could be downloaded and back up copies could truly be made, what would happen if a couple of you were in existence at the same time?” This can relate to the double consciousness issue we brought upon a couple of days ago.
(5) The characters are also culturally conditioned, in that they are created in response to the changing social and cultural environments. (a) Say, in the second stage (from 1951-1960), the WWII ended and the Cold War began, so the emphasis of the heroes shifted from Germany and Japan (the countries who lost the WWII) to Russia and China, the few Communist countries in a world of freedom. So we have hero Captain America fighting the Soviet Union, and a Chinese communist villain known as the Yellow Claw is created. (b) Then, if we go to the third stage (1961-1970), we will see Fantastic Four, Hulk, Spider-Man, DareDevil were created by different forms of exposure to radiation, because radiation is a central theme in many of the comics of the time. This was a definite reflection of the public’s fears concerning radiation in the aftermath of WWII. (c) If we go to the fourth stage, that is during years from 1970 until 1990, “comic books were awash with a multitude of super-powered characters” (220). This relates to the international political environment that at that time, the two superpowers in the world, America and the old Soviet Union were competing against each other, until in 1989 the old Soviet crashed. The individuals in this stage, I mean from 1970 to 1990, not only fight larger external battles but also begin to deal with a bagful of personal problems, for instance, Iron Man comes to grips with alcoholism. The author believes this gives a realistic touch to these super-hero characters and I believe this relates to the universal concern about human technology and also about the issue of alienation of the individual in a world of post-modern at that time or even today.

Works Cited
Gray, Chris Habels. The Cyborg Handbook. New York: Routledge, 1995.

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I think that comics particularly televised ones are great. The part of the Oehlert that I thought was especially interesting, was,

“This is cyborg justice. No Miranda rights, no crowed court dockets, no criminals going free on a technicality. If you attract the attention of a cyborg hero, you can probably expect to be killed or maimed.” 226

I have really mixed feeling about this because our legal system while slow and inefficient etc. does try and to be just, but then again, there are numerous instances of people going to prison for small things that they did do because the large things were not proved for example Al (scarface) Capone went to Alcatraz for income tax evasion.

I think that this quote is very interesting because I really don’t know what justice is.
What sort of code can encompass truth and justice?

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i think the title of the book is like wendell said, an allusion. mary is, in the books time period, a perfect character. she is a cyborg but maintains many human characteristics as well - including dealing with race issues. she also avoids therapy, the thing that dehumanizes. angels, like loretta said, has religious connotations so maybe mary is referred to as such because of her profession - she's a guardian angel of sorts.
i thought oehlert's article was interesting. i'm not a comic book kind of kid, but i do love the x-men movies. wolverine is the perfect example of a cyborg. he's kind of like molly because of his retractable metal claws, but better because of the adamantium that allows him to heal any wound. some characters that were not mentioned were spiderman, superman, or batman. are they not considered cyborgs or just not marvel comic book characters?

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I just read the link Samantha posted about Margaret Sanger…what an amazing woman. I’m ashamed I didn’t know of her beforehand since I strongly believe that women should have control over their bodies and reproduction. The essay for today by Mark Oehlert was interesting. Although I don’t read comic books I think they are a medium that scholars often overlook. I found it interesting that comics in the early twentieth century fictionalized America’s struggles with other nations and that now comic book society is more globalized and the enemy has shifted to huge corporations. Comic books definitely offer material for analysis of cyborg identity and since they are illustrated the cyborg self is explicitly visual. It seems that people are trying to figure out the significance of the title of Bear’s novel _Queen of Angels_. I don’t quite understand what the phrase means though I find it interesting that Jill, the newly self aware somputer, is referred to as an angel (p 402). Mary is called “Queen of Angels” on page 397. The word angel has religious connotations but the book implies superiority and consciousness without specific religious comment. It’ll be interesting to hear other peoples opinions on this in class today.

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Greg Bear Interview http://www.infinityplus.co.uk/nonfiction/intgb.htm
Another Interview http://www.hourwolf.com/chats/gbear.html
Greg Bear Web Site http://www.gregbear.com/

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Just a reminder that starting in the morning we will probably not be able to see our blog posts on the web until the SLA finishes doing server updates on Wednesday.

Hint: I wonder if the QoA had a pet? :-)

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I think that perhaps the queen of angels is some sort of allusion to Mary being sort of an idea character. All of her modifications are to make her more content with herself or to make her a better cop and therefore more content in her work.
One thing that I think is interesting through out that Humans (the self aware) become less and less human through things like therapy etc. But the machines are becoming “human” or self aware, but more then human because there are flawless, and called angels on page 402. and then Mary is called the queen of angels on page 397. Perhaps it could be that the stable untherapyed are indeed angels, or something.

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I have been trying to figure what the significance of the title of the book is, as well. I have not found anything different than what Abby already stated. I don't know if I am taking it too literally and am missing something or what. I would really be interested in hearing any theories anyone else has on what the title means.

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I was thinking about my resonse paper and the first thing that I thought of was the title of the book. What kind of significance does it have? I know that there are angels in the book, but I am a little unclear of thier role. I also looked up some meanings and it meant different things in different religions. If anyone has a better understanding of the title, please let me know.

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There were a couple little things that have jumped out at me as I am glancing through this book again as i prepare to write my response paper. In class on Thursday (I believe) someone asked about the color of Mary's eyes. On pg. 84 in the second line it says her eyes are black. It's really hard for me to imagine what this must look like. You would not be able to distinguish her pupil from the iris (i think that's the word i want, it's been awhile since i've had any kind of anatomy/science class!). The other thing that kinda stood out to me was that when Mary is in going through Goldsmith's place for the context clues, the man who is there, named Meskys, and who i assume is another officer of some sort refers to her as "sir" all the time. In context of the book I take it to be a sign of respect but it shows that this futuristic society still has signs of being more of a patriarchal society that gender-neutral.

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Ok, Sarah...I was looking around at that website and the first thing that comes to my mind is...OUCH! I looked at the male and then female piercings...and my first thoughts were of pain...

Now, some thoughts a little less shallow...I suppose I can't understand why someone would want to do that much modification to their genetalia...I can understand the clit piercings, and maybe the prince alberts...but some of these pictures were so completely disgusting to me...then I tried to think of how I could relate this to the book...and all I could really come up with would be the feelings projected towards Mary--prejudice wise...but, who knows...a complete body over-haul compared to multiple penis piercings...anyone see a connection other than changing yourself to make yourself more internally appealing? Some of these piercings made the genetals appear completely useless in functionality terms...is this the point maybe? I know this is sort of a stretch to compare it to Mary's transformation...but I figured I would comment on it anyhow...I recommend looking at the site...it's a bit odd in some parts...but some of it is very beautiful...Thanks Sarah..

posted by Eileen at 9:25 PM


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Emily: I saw them...I thought that it was interesting that they made a best virtual character award also...it was a pretty good tie into this class...just how virtuality is becoming more and more a daily context...now it's being presented awards on MTV...I found that funny, but interesting...

Well, I have been desperately trying to find the name of the woman who began life as a man and starred in movies with Marilyn Monroe...I can not find anything...but I remember distinctly seeing it on A&E secrets of Sex and Hollywood, or something named like that...I'll keep searching...You would never guess she was born a man...she is purely woman in appearance and shape...it's amazing what surgeries can do to enhance someone's outside to fit their insides like we had been discussing...

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Interesting reading on:

Margaret Sanger (birth control trailblazer)
Helen of Troy
Marilyn Monroe (actress)

Unfortunately, I can't find more on Ann Dietering than the fact that she was an actress that is referenced in 30 sci-fi novels. I search of the Internet Movie Database (http://www.imdb.com) turns up nothing, which is odd.

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I know this has nothing to do with our reading, but did anyone watch the MTV movie awards tonight. The opening secquence was a Matrix theme as well as the set. They also gave a the first award for a virtual performance. Gollup from Lord of the Rings won. They also showed past virtual characters, remember Gizmo from Gremlins and Johnny #5 from short circut, C3PO. I never really thought of them as virtual characters, so I guess Shrek and Monster's Inc. characters would be too? I just thought it was interesting that this was the theme of a once a year event when we are in this class.

posted by Emily at 12:21 AM


wThursday, June 05, 2003


In class today some brought up the different women that Mary saw when looking at Ernest's statue. A connection that was mentioned has to do with Margaret Sanger. Not only was she an economist and theorist, she is also the one who made the connection between reproductive rights and women's economic and social equality. I could go on and on about the wonderful things she has done but I will focus on my point for now. She opened the Birth Control League with later would become the Planned Parenthood Association. I find it interesting that Mary saw her because with her augmentation Mary can now control her reproductive system which is something that Margaret Sanger encouraged.

posted by Shana at 6:03 PM


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An interesting body modification site:

www.bmezine.com

Not for the faint of heart

posted by Sarah at 3:47 PM


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Loretta gives us some great insight on the "Black marks on white eRace back to white" statement. It is fascinating to look at this from a writer's perspective. I think we can maybe even extend this to a metaphor for Goldsmith. He claims that he has a white soul although he has black skin. So, it almost like he has "black marks on white." If his color were erased, we would only see his "white" soul. It seems that Bear is making some sort of a statement on the Westernization and assimilation of cultures. If we are all assimilated into one homogenous Western culture, then we will, in essence, have "white," or Western, souls, despite our colors on the outside. Thus if we are "eRaced" we will all still be the same underneath.

This reminds me of the _HMT_ in that there is a fear of creating a society composed of people who are the same as everyone else. Handmainds had to go through "therapy" to change their own thoughts and opinions, just as the therapied in _Queen of Angels_. I think like Atwood, Bear is sending us a wake-up call. Authenticity, originality, difference are in danger.

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I don’t have too much to say this morning/afternoon. The book is getting more interesting now that Goldsmith is physically in the narrative. I don’t quite understand all of the political tension in the novel especially with Hispaniola…I hope this will become clearer. Like Abby and Laura I see race as being an issue but am not sure what the author means to say about it and society. Richard is a very interesting character. It seems he’s losing his sanity as the book progresses. Abby was wondering about eRace and what it meant. Lillian quoted the line, one of Richard’s thoughts: “+Black marks on white eRace back to white” (104). I didn’t understand this at first but then reading it again in Lillian’s blog, I had a realization. I think Richard is referring to writing. We write words with a pencil and they appear black on white paper but these words can be erased and we are left with the white paper again.

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The further we read into the novel, the more complex it becomes. Race had certainly become a very important issue. Goldsmith considers himself a white man in a black skin while Yarley a black man in a white skin. The significance of Guinee, the paradise of black people of Africa before the slavers arrive, is no longer possible in Goldsmith's idea. He, a white man in black skin, can no longer establish the connection between himself and nature on the American soil. Although he is alive, he considers himself dead. He is resigned. The sacredness of his black culture nature is robbed away. Just like the sacredness of one mysterious - dark - imagination should not be violated. That's why when Nadine probes Ricard's memory, Richard entertains the idea of strangling her. She is using her sympathy as a way to explore him, which she has no right to do. Richard makes up a story to fend her off. I am not sure whether that predicts Goldsmith's strategy of enticing those intruders of his mind in with his answers to their questions.
The constructedness of Mary's skin color and her cutoff situation in Hispaniola are very intriguing. I don't know what they symbolize yet. Does Mary's voluntary skin color indicate there is the possibility of constructing that imagined paradise for African people? Does Mary's journey to Hispaniola means there is a way to render her constructed blackness into true blackness by immersing her into the black culture? Does her cultural cyborgness, her Asian, White, and Black connections would make her succeed in the end? I want to know how three threads of the story - Mary's journey, Richard's journey, and Goldsmith's fate - would join together in the end.

posted by xianfeng at 1:02 PM


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Lillian Liang
Professor Blackmon
English 360K
5 June 2003

My role is to jog the connections and because this article is about cosmetic surgery, I will focus my analysis on Mary. This article speaks directly to Queen of Angels, though often times Mary seems to provide a counter example to what Balsamo argues. Let us back track a little bit. We have spent two classes on QOA and a lot of questions have been brought up and two questions related to this are: First, why Mary undergoes augmentation and accordingly what kind of augmentation she receives? For the first question, we are told that she does this “to get advantage, or to match inner her with an outer appearance that had never satisfied” (8). The interesting thing is that her reason does speak to, though not directly support the reasons Balsamo gives in her article about why women choose to have cosmetic surgery.
In her article, Balsamo argues that women get surgery to increase their gender female, to fix the physical abnormality or physical flaw, and to achieve “normalcy” (63). So “women’s choice for cosmetic surgery” is “normal” and “natural” (69). All this talk is about women trying to conform to normal gender roles, to achieve the cultural ideals of the female body. But the beauty achieved in this way is “assembly line beauty” (58), based on Balsamo, because “difference is made over into sameness” (58).
But the surgery Mary receives, on the contrary, makes her distinct from, instead of similar to conventional beauty type. And this makes her an alien. On page 8 her friend Theo says to her “You are a fapping alien”, a metaphor of alienation. Later on Ernest says to Mary that “you tell me she [Theo] is your friend, but I never saw such a friend. …Wants to be like you, but hates you for being different” (86). And we also know that Mary is cut off from her mother and her family.
So the question arises, why Mary is regarded as an alien after receiving surgery, if we accept Balsamo’s view that surgery can make us a piece of work in the assembly line. This goes back to the question what kind of surgery she receives. And we know she gives herself “an exotic design” (8). Her skin, her face color, her biological clock, her birth control ability, her smell, her nipple, etc erode the gender boundaries and make her gender neutral instead of feminine. And this is regarded unreal (Richard believes Mary is unreal) because society accepts that surgery is a “technological elimination of facial “deformities” and it will enhance a woman’s “natural” beauty, so if the surgery Mary gets makes her distinct, or deformed, she is an unreal person. I agree with what Balsamo says here “We encounter one of the more persistent contradictions within the discourse of cosmetic surgery: namely, the use of technology to augment “nature” (60).
But another question arises, if people around regard her an alien after the surgery, what about herself? Does she feel comfortable about all this? Has she ever regretted? We are told that often times she undergoes struggles between the present self and original self on both physical level and social level. For instance she is quite a couple of times concerned about “the crease of her buttocks was turning gray” (3). She seems to be irritated about the blanching (120) and she believes it is silly to be seen by others (132). This relates to the race issue we are going to talk about today.
Balsamo argues that “Cosmetic surgeons demonstrate an unshakable belief in a Westernized notion of “natural beauty” (Balsamo 79). So her argument is that if you don’t have western beauty, you need to change your self and conform to that standard. Say, like in The Handmaid’s Tale, Japanese women made eye surgeries that their eyes look more Western. But we see a different picture in Mary’s case. Ernest says to Mary that “You are truly a dark woman. Not just nature’s halfhearted night; you are dark where sun never dares inquire” (132). So what does “half-hearted dark” mean? I think it means what Balsamo comments about the dark women who undergo or may want to undergo surgery to change their black color. So Mary is different from them. She doesn’t need to change the black color to “improve self-esteem, social status” as argued by Balsamo (58). But why then, Mary is so concerned about that gray blanching? Is that because she is worried about not being black enough? Why does Greg Bear purposely leave Mary a scar, trace, mark, vestige after the surgery? Furthermore, why Mary uses “vinegar bath”? Does this relate to her dissatisfaction about the decoloration, because we also find the sentence “race is like acid in a tight metal groove; we etch” appearing quite a few times also. It is interesting to note that Balsamo points out that “It is a basic belief that “white, symmetrical faces” “heal (apparently) without scarring” (Balsamo 60) and “it is true that black patients and patients with dark ruddy complexions have a greater prosperity to form keloids or hypertrophic scars than do Caucasian patients” , though “many physicians argue that black patients who are shown to be prone to keloid formation in the lower body are not necessarily prone to such formations in the facial area and upper body” (Balsamo 61). And “incision lines are much more visible in many black patients and races of color than their Caucasian counterparts” (Balsamo 61). Balsamo uses these facts to support her argument that “regardless of race” is not a widely shared assumption among cosmetic surgeons. Xian feng talked about this already, but I want to ask whether we can read this as a footnote for “the crease of her buttocks” (3) thing.
Balsamo also argues that males who receive cosmetic surgery tend to explain this “as a shrewd business tactic: a better looking body is better able to be promoted. In this case, cosmetic surgery is redefined as a body management technique designed to reduce the stress of having to cope with a changing work environment, one that is being threatened by the presence of women and younger people” (Balsamo 67). What we see in QOA is just the other way round, that Mary does the surgery for her career enhancement. Examples include she can “coast for many hours without sleep” (48), her camouflage skin, etc.
Summary. We know that gender is a socially constructed thing. Like Molly, Mary constructs herself through surgery and both of them use their bodies to “stage cultural identities” (Balsamo 78). Balsamo argues that “The female body comes to serve as a site of inscription, a billboard for the dominant cultural meanings that the female body” (78) has. Then both Molly and Mary’s bodies are super inscribed. But what is significant is that in both cases we see a reverse or a flip of gender roles. Both of them are gendered active. They reconstruct their female bodies as a power. This goes back to our frequent issue that what role technology plays in all this? On page 78, Balsamo concludes that “cosmetic surgery illustrates a technological colonization of women’s bodies; others see it as a technology women can use for their own ends”. In his summary Balsamo is reluctant to accept that cosmetic surgery is simple one more site where women are passively victimized. In other words, cosmetic surgery is both a form of oppression and a resource of empowerment, but whatever it is, she argues “Cosmetic surgery is a practice whereby women consciously act to make their bodies mean something to themselves and to others” (78). There are 3 kinds of people in this world: people who wonder what happened, who watch things happen, and who make things happen. Molly and Mary belong to the third. While some women use cosmetic surgeries to reconstruct their bodies as a signifier of ideal feminine beauty, Molly and Mary make them mean a lot more.


Works Cited
Balsamo, Anne Marie. Technologies of the Gendered Body: Reading Cyborg Women. Duran:
Duke UP, 1996.
Bear, Greg. Queen of Angels. New York, A Time Warner Company, 1990.




posted by lillian at 12:55 PM


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who owns art? i think art is owned by the artist, but appreciated (or not) by the person looking at it or interacting with it. obviously, art is owned by the purchaser as well.
why does mary respond to ernest's art in the way she does? mary is surpressing memories of her past, especially about her parents and when those are brought to the surface, so to speak, it disturbs her. also, she's not sure if ernest can see what her memories are. if he can, he may think she is not as strong of a woman as she seems to be. she wasn't warned about what would happen and like i think marcus said, she was robbed of choice. that would piss anyone off.
as far as mary's sexual augmentation goes, i think it should be a device we use today. of course it wouldn't prevent std's, so we'd still have to use pesky condoms, but women would feel a lot safer and many would able to prevent pregnancy from rape or abuse. mary's body is altogether exotic - the color of her body, her sexual scent, her retractable nipples - and now this gate she can deactivate at any time. i think it's awesome that she has almost total control over her body. it prevents her from getting distracted by men or motherhood and helps her to concentrate on being a police woman.
race doesn't seem to be a huge issue thus far. we know the races of some characters, but it doesn't seem to be dwelled on or attempted to be wiped out, like in hmt.

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Greg Bear:

Has anyone found out detailed information about him? I tried and failed with a web search..not my specialty. I almost feel throughout this novel that the race issue is something he is trying to discuss but just can't quite be comfortable enough with to do so. He needs it for the plot but it almost seems very superficial. He talks over and over about the White Man forcing himself upon everyone else, but that is an easy thing for anyone to use anymore. The evil White Man has ruined everyone else's culture and identity. But that's where he seems to stop. Perhaps this is why he chose to leave the race issues to characters we never really get to know. He hints around about Mary's racial/ethnic origin but we also never get any deeper with her even though she is our main character.

He also treats the gender issue in the same way. Through Mary, we get brief glimpses of how her own gender matters. But they are very brief and seem almost detached from the rest of the novel. He is very elaborate about the statue art, but then it is forgotten.

I'd really like to know his motives. Does he want to talk about such issues but feels he cannot be too deep within his genre? Is he trying to reach other markets by including issues he himself isn't too comfortable with? Is this just his understanding of things and his attempt to write about them?

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Cosmetic Surgery:

It seems that whenever someone talks about cosmetic surgery, they discuss the concepts of beauty and society as if there is some ultimate mastermind controlling these things. WE are society and therefore WE are the ones who decide what is beautiful. Beauty in definition is a subjective thing. Of course in the US, beauty is a Western look because that's where we are. And the advertisers and media are not some evil force that we are subjected to. We are the ones controlling them. If Abercrombie all of the sudden started putting its clothes on fat, acne-ridden, [insert other undesireable traits] models in their commercials, most likely they would lose a lot of business to the other stores whose commercials are full of "gorgeous" bodies.

One large sector of the media is the motion picture industry. Typically, just about every PG-13 or R rated movie will have some sort of nudity scene most likely featuring some unrealistically skinny actress. We then complain that they are setting these standards and causing us all to feel worthless and have horrible self esteem. Yet, when a movie shows some non-standard appearance actress nude (like for instance Cathy Bates in About Schmidt) the comments I hear aound me are those of disgust for seeing her nude body on screen. Why? She's older, larger, and not the typical Hollywood beauty.

Where am I going with this? Cosmetic surgery, makeup, eating disorders, fad diets, etc really shouldn't be our central focus. These are simply the outlets for the insecurities of people who are the ones setting the standards too high themselves. People shouldn't be attacking the cosmetic surgery industry. If someone is going to pay a lot of money to a surgeon who is going to cut them down and use derogatory terms about their desire for their services, I really don't think the surgeon is the one with a problem. Those who want to make a difference in this respect should focus instead on the people who are subjecting themselves to this. Start with educational programs to the youth. Establish healthy self-esteems to start with. Yes it can be done. There are quite a few people walking around who are not anything near the Western standard of beauty who have very high self esteem and self confidence and believe themselves to be absolutely great just the way they look. I happen to be one of them. For those of you who can't connect the name with the face, I'm the "girl" with the buzzed hair who is overweight, doesn't wear expensive or trendy clothes, and doesn't spend any money on beauty products.

I think we put way too much emphasis on the body and not enough on the mind. This whole course we have been discussing the body over and over again: how it is constructed, how it is augmented, how it reacts with technology. The body is just a lump of flesh. The mind is what gives us self-awareness. The mind uses the body as a tool to explore its world. And our brains all look pretty much the same.

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The issue of race is obviously prevalent throughout the story and Goldsmith is the character who makes it so. In his poetry he is always making reference to his heritage and to Africa itself. I think it was Richard who pointed out that Goldsmith liked to use coffee metaphors to distinguish between how blacks are perceived in that society versus whites. The race issue also comes up in Choy's line of thinking as she is trying to find out the motive behind Goldsmith's murdering. So, in QoA, race is something that cannot be avoided and to have Goldsmith be a black man only adds to the controversy of the murders. Also, it seems that the idea of the transform is itself another race that society has to deal with. So not only are the racial issues of the past not dealt with but the new society has created another race (or color) for people to pass judgements on.

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If all people were therapied, society would be extremely boring. I feel as though the society they are living in has no sense of "color" not in the sense of the word, but in the sense of "character." It is true that someone's pain makes them who they are. Who are these people, do the they have any character? It remind's me of the movie "A Beautiful Mind," the main character has schizophrenia...sp? With his medication he cannot adjust his mind to solve these impossible puzzles. So he discontinues his medication in order to do his work. In discontinueing his medication he also suffers from hallucinations, and becomes paranoid. In choosing pain or no pain he chooses pain in order to continue his work, to continue who he is.

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i am still confused about richard fettle. is he mentally connected to goldsmith? are the plus signs indicators that goldsmith is talking to richard, as if he is hearing a voice inside his head? he speaks of a "war within" and has urges to kill nadine like goldsmith killed the eight kids. richard seems possesed or something to me. he admits he is sick, then we start to see minus signs instead of plus signs. i can't figure out what's going on, but i do think this is a kind of internal struggle with goldsmith.

also, i'm unsure of the significance of race in the book, i see race as a big issue for goldsmith, but for the rest of the characters, i'm not getting it.

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I find it interesting that Goldsmith's character is a black male who also happens to take part in a horrendous murder. In today's American society, it sometimes seems like the main evil or the main type of person who commits crime is a black male. Or at least these are the types of criminals commonly mentioned in the news. This just enforces the stereotype that all black males are thugs, criminals, and want to rape white women. For example, the woman who drowned her 2 kids inside her car a few years ago, lied and said that a black male had kidnapped her kids and did those horrible things. And the police didn't even bother to question or suspect the mother at all. And if this society in Queen Of Angels, wants to eradicate all evil, it seems like black males might be the target audience for the source of evil.

The book also mentioned how Hispaniola is becoming "white". White is the cultural standard. It's the cultural standard in the USA. Like white culture, can't lower itself to black culture. But they expect black culture to rise up to white standards and to accept the white way of life. And to relate that to gender, like if a woman wants to become successful in business or whatever, she often has to take on male characteristics such as aggression. Like women are expected to conform to the needs of men. But men can't do the same for women. Why should a woman have to become more male-like in character, just to get ahead in the world? Or is it even possible to remain "feminine" and still be able to get ahead?

posted by Amanda at 2:33 AM


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Along with Abby, I also wonder why the issue of race seems to be such an important factor. Since he is white, it makes me wonder where his motivation comes from to make such a big effort to focus on race. I also think that our discussion today about Mary's sexual power as well as her ability to choose whether or not she wants to be an active sexual being and she has the option of stopping her reproductive system by choice is important. I think the fact that she has that control over her sexual body (including the retractable nipples) just gives her even more power over men. This gives her the ability to be absolutely not interested in sex in any way when she is not willing to be. I think it is true that women have sexual urges just like men do, and perhaps through an increased ability to control such urges, a female has even more power over men. Men are constantly thinking of sex and would probably jump on any opportunity to engage in sexual activity. If their partner has absolutely no interest in sex, can retract her nipples, can stop her reproductive system, this gives her an increased power to deny the man sex. I think Mary's control over sex is similar to Molly's. Both women are portrayed as being strong women with huge sexual power over men. This sexual power is something that a man can never control, which probably makes it that much more gratifying for the woman.

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I am interested in learning more about the issue of race in this novel. I did look up the author and he is white. He also has done some traveling in Japan. I am not quite sure why race comes up so much in the novel. It definately seems like Africans are struggling to be certain things in this society, such as poets. I was also a little confused when they talk about e race. I also think that because Mary can control her sexuality she is even more sensual to her man.

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Yesterday in class we discussed the issue of the therapied vs. the untherapied in Queen of Angels, and how this distinction related to those who have mental problems but often refuse to take their medicine, arguing that it stifles creativity. While medication might cause a bipolar to gain lucidity, it might nonetheless numb the creative impulse. I myself take anti-depressants to regulate the level of serotonin in my body; without this neurotransmitter, I find it difficult to function. But there is a certain trade-off: while my mind gains clarity from the medication, my emotions lose much of their former intensity. Sometimes I go off my medication for a few days so that I don't feel so emotionally numb . . . In regard to the novel, I understand the resistance of the untherapied, who don't wish to stifle their creativity by undergoing the numbing force of therapy. The untherapied have no desire to rid themselves of their personal pain. Perhaps this is because pain is a prime impetus and source for creativity . . . and pain is also part of one's identity. This reluctance to part with pain reminded me of one of the old Star Trek movies, in which Spok's half-brother was playing therapist by evoking the painful memories of his subjects in order to cure them. Defiant, Captain Kirk resists, insisting, "I need my pain," and claiming that his pain has made him who he is. It is this sort of resistance to pain-relieving therapy and elimination of personal flaws that we see in Queen of Angels. As Richard explains, "+To love one's self is to be therapied. Self-hatred is freedom" (11).

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As I read on, the novel becomes more complex. I am intrigued by one sentence which says that Richard's inner voice is Goldsmith. Then in a certain sense, Goldsmith is cyborg in nature. The intalicized sections between chapters first strike me as of the voice of Gold smith. Yet when Richard does become able to write, what he produces matches the intalicized sections in voice and theme. Since both of them are naturals and Richard is the closest friend of Goldsmith, I guess Richard's voice represents Goldsmith's. The reader gets to know some of Goldsmith's thoughts in the early part of the novel, though Goldsmith is absent.
I am puzzled by Richard's explanation of Goldsmith's motive for the mass murder. We are sort of sure that Goldsmith did that, and the novel proceeds to unravel the mystery. When Mary Choy puts the question to Richard, Richard replies that Goldsmith killed them to save them from the forsaken future where no colorfulness exists. Yet, in his mind, Richard tells himself that Goldsmith kills the victims not for their benefit for his own benefit. The part of the novel I have covered does not give the answer. At one point, the novel tells us that Goldsmith considers himself thoroughly culturally white, though he is, I assume, African American. Does he kill to have some evil in himself, or because of the despair he felt at his rootlessness? In his interview which Martin has viewed, Goldsmith believes that the skin color of African Americans in the States to Africans on the African continent. Is he in despair at that?
I did not detect the role of gender so far. However, I am surprised by the hellcrown that Earnest displays to Mary. That image acts kind of like an imperceptible thing able to invade into a person's dreamstate. But I guess it is more dangerous than the Country of the Mind Martin is doing, because hellcrown is only an image may or may not exist. It does not need computers to invade into a person's mind. Is it cyborg in natre? If yes, if is scaring.

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Lillian Liang
Professor Blackmon
English 360K
4 June 2003

I will share with you here my thoughts about gender issues at play in the novel thus far. The teacher asked us to notice that at the very beginning Mary’s body color is mentioned. And “discoloration”, “stress”, and “the crease of her buttocks” are linked together, and we are told “her buttocks was turning gray in the universal deep black” (3). On page 8 we are told she has “black fingers”. (I am not sure whether this echoes the mentioning of her hands being detached page 85.) And a few lines down, we learn that this “exotic design” (8) is her own choice. On page 13 there is a metaphor. “Race is like acid in a tight metal groove. We etch”. So race marker cannot be easily erased. This speaks to the reason why Mary has de-coloration on her buttocks and may imply why Mary has to use “vinegar bath”. On page 120, when she is alone, she is “inspecting the crease of her buttocks” and finds it “still blanched”. And she thinks about reverting back to the state before therapy. So her crease is the undesirable after effects of the therapy.
Therefore therapy and racial marker are closely related. At the beginning we are told Theo even doesn’t “want to see” her (8) in person. This may suggest her disgust at seeing Mary’s body. On page 132 when Mary is having sex with Ernest, she herself also doesn’t want him to see her buttocks. But her darkness---the color of her body and of several parts of the body are commented upon by Ernest and we know that Mary wants her robe to be “green” (135) and “brown” (135) instead of black. (I am not sure here whether the dragon design has something to do with the traditional image of a dragon lady, but “Queen” (132) is first time mentioned in the book.)
I like the way the race issue being brought up in this novel. For instance, we know until one third of the book that Goldsmith is also a black. If we say Mary and Martin are two primary cyborgs in the novel, on page 108 we are told explicitly Goldsmith is another one. Why his first love affair is in his senior year? And why one love affair ends “in the suicide of a woman” (100)? Therefore, not only therapy and race is involved, sex jumps in also. I believe this has something to do with his theory about coffee and cream, because right after we read “+Goldsmith could not tolerate cream milk and dairy but delact
+Black marks on white eRace back to white” (104).
And for the first time we are told “the black transform woman Lieutenant Choy”. Black is not only related to her body parts, but her body as a whole this time, though the contrast between “white teeth” and her “black skin” becomes the focus again. But to Richard, “she cannot be real none of this is real” (105). It seems that beauty is skin deep applies to Mary perfectly here because Richard only sees her real or beautiful behind her skin. Richard also has a theory about people who have undergone transformation, because he still delights at seeing Mary behave and sound feminine and warm. This again relates to the conventional image of gender roles.
I agree with the class discussions about what does “transform” or “therapy” signify. I noticed that when these two words appear, they are often times collocated with various words, including “misfits” (4), “edge” “compete” (7), “alien” (8), “natural”, “help” (35), “passions” (50), “stylish” (51), “antisocial offenders” (53), “stable” (61), “well adjusted” (84), “surgeon” (84), “different” (86), “health” (97), “sane” (126), “capture and torture” (129), “being in the clamp” (129), “restrictions” (130).
A “transform” is “exotic and protected” (7) as seen from Theo’s eyes, but on page 51 Mary also mentions that by being “stylish” (51) she has “only eight lives”. So on the one hand, she is more “protected”, because she has eliminated human flawnesses, but on the other, she has used human potential to the full and only leaves herself 8 lives, which means she is more vulnerable than others.
I feel like the techniques Martin has also relates to this therapy issue. I hope we can talk a little bit about his techniques, especially on page 92-95. Because here “therapy” has distinctions between “suppression of unwanted or defective subpersonality” and “the stimulation of discarded rountines”, though both having the purpose of achieving “balance” (95).
Works Cited
Bear, Greg. Queen of Angels. New York, A Time Warner Company, 1990.



posted by lillian at 12:57 PM


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i'm in agreement with everyone that societal norms make people insecure, among other things. i would like to ask everyone this question-WHY? i think it is because the powers that be, want to control us!! people don't think for themselves or question these "norms" we become sheep-want to know what to do in your spare time? pick up an issue of "woman's day" magazine. want to know what clothes to wear? find an article on the latest fashions on the internet. want to know "what men want"? buy a cosmopolitan.
this is disturbing to me, the root of the problem lies in this consumerist culture we've created. anyway, enough of my ranting, i could fill pages!!

in class yesterday we talked about the significance of the plus signs in the richard sections of the book. i have finished the book already and the richard sections only get more interesting, i can't figure out exactly what they mean, but i think he is trying to "therapy" himself by telling himself the things with the plus signs attached, because they do seem to be internal.

posted by amy at 12:49 PM


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Our discussion yesterday and the blogs about cosmetic surgery bring up good points. I also think it is quite sad that many women and even men displace their personal insecurity as body flaws and then go through surgery to become more “perfect” but end up even more unhappy. In general I think the commercial attitude of pointing out flaws and then offering products to correct the problems is very annoying given its basis of making money by deceiving people. Luckily, I don’t have tv so I am spared from all the stupid commercials.
About QoA, Lillian asks some interesting questions in her blog. I believe the italic sections between chapters are the words of Emanuel Goldsmith. On page 3 the italicized section is quoted as being Goldsmith’s and what we learn about him seems to support these sections as being his work. This is stylistically interesting on Greg Bear’s part. He is allowing us to form an impression of Goldsmith outside of what other characters say about him. And since the sections are his poetry we are given an intimate point of view. There is another, block type font that is related to axis, artificial intelligence, and litvid. I’m not sure yet about the significance of these sections. The concept of “Fausting” is interesting. I have not personally read Faust but my boyfriend did a term paper on Faust so I asked him about it. It seems that Faust was tempted by the devil and gave in to temptation thus Martin is tempted by Albigoni and he gives in. If anyone else has read Faust they’d probably be able to better explain the significance of this term but I though I’d try since Lillian mentioned it.
Amy drew a connection between the selectors and the eyes from HMT. This seems really interesting. I’m still not sure what role the selectors play in this society but that insight puts a new spin on what I understand so far.

posted by loretta at 12:39 PM


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In response to what Jamie said...The westernized eyes is not the only surgery that people of another race are getting...I know that in Africa, it's popular for women to use a bleach made of quinine (it may be a different poison, but I think that's it...I know it starts with a "Q") to lighten their skin tones so they aren't as dark...and I know that in some Asian countries it's popular to literally stretch the legs to add inches of height...These types of surgeries are grotesque and even more risky than the typical lipo-suction or breast augmentation...It's really sad that women, even men too, believe themselves to be less than beautiful just because their skin may be different...or they aren't "westernized" in appearance...or that their breasts are too small...This is how I see Mary's transformation...I don't mind it when people have surgeries to make themselves feel better...for example an implant for a woman who has had a masectomy, or breast reduction due to back problems...etc...but when someone does it for the public...it's a bit of an off decision in my eyes...

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I was thinking, once products are on the market for a period of time, their price generally drops. In a futuristic society, I believe that cosmetic surgery will be affordable for all people. Who knows, they may have do-it-yourself packs!
Another thought, in a world where cosmetic surgery is easily accessible to everyone, and everyone looks beautiful and somewhat the same, is it possible that looks will finally not become important in society? If all of society is beautiful and perfect, what would be considered attractive? Who would be the top supermodel? I feel that society places beauty on things that most people do not have, exotic features, things that stand out, things that a "normal" person could not easily achieve. For instance, most women are a size 12-16, supermodels being a size 0-4. This body type is abnormal, and in most cases achievable only if one were to starve themselves. Plus how many women do you know that are 6 feet tall? Not too mention, in America, a strong beauty trait to us is a European accent. Giselle, the top supermodel has this accent, this seems to add to her beauty, because it is unachievable for us Americans to just pick up this accent! In a futuristic world, where everything is acheivable, what beauty characteristic won't be?

posted by Lauren at 12:22 PM


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the whole cosmetic surgery fad has always astounded me. i admit that i have some insecurities about aging, but sticking a needle in my forehead or vacuuming out the insides of my thighs just doesn't sound comfortable or worthwhile to me. i think that type of surgery should be saved for people who really need it, not given out like candy at halloween. xianfeng's presentation was really interesting. she brought up a lot of good points about cosmetic surgery as a mask for women's insecurities. i found it odd that women of oriental ethnicity would reconstruct their eyes to better resemble western culture. that, to me, is the ultimate slap in their culture's face! Molly and Mary are two characters that alter their appearances surgically, but in their worlds it doesn't seem odd or sick. i think that because they do it in a way that will be used as protection and offense, like xianfeng says in her blog. i really appreciate the fact that their motives do not lie in male appreciation, like today's women's sometimes do.

posted by jamie at 11:24 AM


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I concur with the general argument proposed in the last few bloggs, I think that society is trying to make people insecure and then sell them stuff so that they will be able to compensate for something. Cosmetic surgery or parallel things have an impact on many people, for example one of my friends thinks in all honesty that if he had a better car that girls would like him more. I don’t know but I concur there is too much done by society to keep insecure and self doubting, and then telling people that some product will give them white teeth and an perfect life to boot.

Is this what Mary did in QOA I mean she did have the ultimate cosmetic surgery.

Did she do this for herself image, if so does she seem more complete now then before?

Did she do this for her career, what sort of job(non entertainment related) puts so much pressure on appearance.

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I completely agree with what Amanda said. Society dictates what is "beautiful" and everyone fallls victim to it. Even those who you may not think have any imperfections probably see something you don't when they look in the mirror. Advertising capitolizes on this. It plays on our fears and insecurities, then sells us solutions to these "problems." While video games and the likes are not necessarily things you see all the time. Advertising, however, is hard to escape. Magazines, TV, Internet, radio, billboards. These ideals of beauty are thrown at us over and over throughout our day. Unless of course you never leave your house and don't own a tv or radio, don't subscribe to magazines or internet access. Then maybe you could escape all these images. Cosmetic surgery is a quick and easy (although not cheap) answer. While there are some surgeries that are necessary (like breast reductions and some weight reduction surgeries) to improve health related problems, most are done for purely cosmetic purposes. Many times the person undergoing the surgery thinks that it will solve all their other problems when really it's something internal. It's easy to see how someone could become addicted to being online where they can change their appearance to fit whatever they want it to be. It would be cheaper than the surgery and they could change their body whenever they wanted to as many times as they wanted to.

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After reading Balsamo's article on "The Virtual Body in Cyberspace", made me think about how I would make my virtual self appear. I could remain just how I look now, make myself a man, something that isn't even human, but I decided that I would probably make myself appear as I do now, but with a few changes. I'd take off a few pounds here and there. Make my tits a little perkier. Fairer skin. Different hairstyle, etc...I would probably conform to Western beauty standards, rather than just accept myself for who I am. And this relates to Balsamo's article on Cosmetic Surgery and how people will change their looks to become the ideal beauty. Like in cyberspace, traditional ideas of beauty/gender/sexuality/race/etc are supposed to be non-existant. But really how many people in cyberspace would keep their looks exactly the same as they are in real life? Most people probably would change themselves to fit whatever they find beautiful and attractive. Which most likely would be Western beauty ideals. At least in America, Europe, and some Asian countries. So would cyberspace really be an escape from these things? And after reading the Cosmetic Surgery article, it reminded me of this special MTV aired about cosmetic surgery. Two girls featured in it, were going to get liposuction, their lips filled, and one was getting a nose job. First of all, I saw nothing wrong with the looks of these 2 girls. I'm sure most males would have found them attractive. They were pretty, had good sized boobs, and small waists. But one of the girls didn't like the fact that her thighs touched. I thought most people's thighs touched each other. And then the MALE cosmetic surgeon who was examining them, noticed and pointed out some fat she had on her hips. It wasn't even that much fat or anything. Not even a handful. So she decided on getting that fat removed as well. There was nothing wrong with this girl's body. But in her mind she was completely flawed. The only reason why these girls were getting cosmetic surgery, was so that they could get into Playboy, which was one of their major goals in life. I just find that pathetic. So after they go through tremendous pain after these surgeries and get pictures taken to send to Playboy, they decide that they hate the way they look in them, and never even sent in the pictures. A male was also featured on this show. He was getting calf implants. He thought his calves were too tiny which made his legs look girl like. I would say that this guy was attractive, in a Western sense. But he thought that his calves were just horrible and that's why he couldn't get a girlfriend. Like a girl is really going to be like "I can't date you because your calves are too small". Even after his calf implants, he still didn't get a girlfriends. Another person featured on this show, was this woman who was quite obese and had the size of her stomach surgically made smaller to lose weight. She was doing this for both health and cosmetic reasons. Another person featured on this program was a former model, who had liposuction done to remove small amounts of fat that wouldn't go away. After getting her 1st liposuction, she started noticing more and more flaws in her body that she had to perfect. She got another liposuction done, but too much fat was taken out, which caused something in her leg to collapse and she was retaining water in these huge pockets. The pictures of it were quite grotesque. It has taken her like 8 surgeries to fix this. But what this model was saying, is that cosmetic surgery won't fix your body image problems. It's emotions inside that you have to deal with to fix things. I found this MTV show to be quite informative. Cosmetic surgery doesn't fix everything.

posted by Amanda at 12:21 AM


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Abby's and Amanda's posts are interesting in that they bring up the images of women's bodies in video games. Although I am happy to see a few more video games that employ a lead female character, the ways in which these women are constructed say much about how women's bodies are gendered. Even going as a far back as Ms. Pac-man, we still had to give her a pink bow in order to differentiate her from Pac-man. Her name itself is interesting as well--instead of Pac-woman, she must be Ms. Pac-man. Though the Ms. attempts to free her from patriarchal restraints, the use of Pac-man instead of Pac-woman enforces her inferior social status. When we look at today's video-game women, we see the scantily-clad and curvaceous Laura Croft. Other video games use women as minor characters that are there to help the males. For instance, I have hear about a game called Grandtheft Auto in which the male characters use prostitutes to gain energy. These gendered constructions reflect the demographics of video game consumers: teenaged males.

These gendered female body types also remind me of those found in comic books as well. I think there is a clear connection between these types of characters and Molly, as well as Mary, to some extent. Their transformations make them seem like comic book or video game action heroes.

posted by Tory at 3:23 PM


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Lillian Liang
Professor Blackmon
English 360K
3 June 2003

Continue yesterday’s discussions, I think we need to look sci fi the genre, as a whole. A great thing about this course is that we learn that non-mainstream works, like sci fi, are so interesting and so social, I mean something profound can come out of them. So I did preliminary researches about this genre after yesterday’s class. I learned that sci fi often uses novelette or novella as primary forms and it has certain techniques, images or patterns. For instance, in Neuromancer, the name Wintermute immediately creates visual images in our minds. But the option is endless. I mean, there are definitely no modules, master copies to adapt from. Yesterday we talked about the ethnic background of the characters in Neuromancer. These are crucial to our understandings of sci fi. First, sci fi is basically still white, I mean not only the writers are whites, the characters are also white, which is at least true for the two sci fi we have learned so far. Last week we watched the movie The Matrix and one of the basic themes is to free our minds, go beyond boundaries, borders, distinctions, and don’t be a slave anymore. So on one hand, we could argue that there are no, say Asian voices in sci fi, but on the other, a world without borders, boundaries, where everything is possible, is maybe the world sci fi writers aim for. Secondly, I kind of agree that male voices still dominate in the technology world, as seen not only from the relationship between naming and power as pointed out in our discussions, but also from the fact that sci fi writers are still basically male. I still have one question about this genre. While I read criticisms, I see people use “cyberpunk” a lot. I don’t think sci fi and cyberpunk are the same and I believe different sci fi writers have different opinions about this, but what are their basic distinctions? Bear with me for using boundary thinking again.
I finished one third of Queen of Angels and I found it pretty interesting, though for the analysis’s sake, I need to read carefully and that is why I didn’t finish it in one go. I would say this is a thriller and also a sci fi. Bear’s style is straight and forward. Although there are more characters than in Neuromancer, and it is a little dense, it is enjoyable to read and the plot works well. Actually it looks like it is simpler than Neoromancer to me.
A couple of major questions from the reading I have done so far inlcude: (1) the significance of using italics between chapters and also using different font types in some chapters; (2) The significance of being “therapied” and “transformed”, because I believe this relates to one of the course themes---the human-machine interface. What is the risk of being “untherapied”? What is the danger of being “too therapied” (40)? (3) The significance of using “Faust” (42) and how does this relate to the mad / bad scientists formula that often frequents sci fi? (Opps, I am using formula thinking again.) (4) What is so special about “Selectors”? What does “Selector philosophy” (51) signify? (5) I haven’t read really important passages about sex or sexuality so far, though passages about Martin and Carol could be counted.
Balsamo’s article about virtual body continues the concept of “virtual reality” and focuses on the role of body in the formation of virtual reality. Her basic argument is that “The repression of the material body belies a gender bias in the supposedly disembodied (and gender-free) world of virtual reality” and “VR technologies have the effect of naturalizing a gendered body phenomenon” (123). I find the issue of “internalizing the technological gaze” (125) ties pretty well with her other articles. Things I am pretty interested in this article include: (1) The reason why “the best (mythical) cyberspace events have all taken place” (119) are in the “wild West” (119); (2) I agree that “There is a lot of money to be made in the development and marketing of cyberspace” (122), and I find the product examples given on page 121 pretty precise, but I believe there should be a lot more; (3) On page 121 Balsamo says “Members of the cyberpunk subculture---who are also the programmers, designers, and technicians”, so my question is that if “programmers, designers, and technicians” “also” belong to cyberpunk subculture, then what does the main population of this subculture consist of? (4) The “juxtaposition of technology and the counterculture” (122) is an interesting phenomenon. It is also worthy to note that on one hand, “virtual reality technologies are implicated in the production of a certain set of cultural narratives that reproduce dominant relations of power” (123); and on the other, “the use of such technologies, are determined by broader social and cultural forces” (123).

Works Cited
Balsamo, Anne Marie. Technologies of the Gendered Body: Reading Cyborg Women. Duran:
Duke UP, 1996.
Bear, Greg. Queen of Angels. New York: A Time Warner Company, 1990.



posted by lillian at 12:51 PM


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"Cosmetic surgery" reminds me of the scene in Neoromancer where Riviera imagines Molly into being. Riviera first fragements Molly's body part by part, and makes changes like larger breasts. The fragmentation is in fact surveillance and those changes reflect his desire and ways of and inscription. Only at the last stage does he wills her head into existence. That may reflect the male assumption that a woman's head, her thoughts, is the least important. But the imagined Molly proves contrary. Once her head comes into being, she attacks Riviera with blades hidden in her nails.
Confession works from the women's perspective. When a woman internalizes and accepts the "flawed identity" of her body, she actually confesses her physical abnormality in need of "fixing" (Balsomo "Cosmetic Surgery," 56-57). Therefore her body is transformed into an object of technological reconstruction, hence a site of cultural signification. But, in Neuromancer, Molly reverses the cultural assumption. She adopts technological reconstruction of her body not for the enjoyment or appreciation for the males, but for her own benefit of preotection and offensive capability. As we have discussed, she augments her eyes to prevent others from probing her and at the same time subject others to the passive position with her sunglasses. Her implanting of razor blades under her fingernails strengthens her capability to attack, or at least intimidate the males. Gibson's rewriting of Molly's intention, in my opinion, reflects his realization that women's adoption of technological surgery may run contrary to the cultural expectation. Women may use this retreat as an offensive strategy to control men.

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Queenm of Angels seems to be an easier read that Neuromancer so far. However, I'm having a hard time keeping track of all of the acronyms and computer gibberish going on. Hopefully we can clear all that stuff up in class.

posted by Russell at 12:24 PM


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I can't help but read sci-fi without my preconceived notions of the type of guys who are computer oriented. And I'm talking about the ones who get really into it. I've been surrounded by them all my life. And I really don't think that "computer geek" is a stereotype because it is inherent in the nature of being one. If you are going to be online and/or playing video games extensively, you are stuck in one room without a lot of real human to human interaction and definitely without a lot of physical exercise. To me, these are the people who these video games and sci-fi novels are marketed toward. Therefore, I would argue that reading these for a look into gender roles cannot occur from a common American culture frame of reference. The market for these types of materials is sort of this counter-culture of computer geeks. And most of them don't interact with girls all that often. And the girls who are part of this world aren't your typical girls either. Sci-fi to me is fantasy land. The guys reading it are typically not your All-American muscle-bound guys. They therefore either identify with the weak hero or long to be the super-strong hero. And perhaps to them women are these mysterious, powerful beings. Women do hold a certain power over guys in that the boys are trying to get a piece and women are often the ones who determine whether they do or not. Yes this is all very stereotypical, but stereotypes often have a base in reality. Therefore I wonder if Gibson actually analyzed any of the things we talked about in class when he wrote this novel. I have a feeling he was more geared toward the computer stuff and actually trying to make the novel seem a lot like a video game because thats what the consumer likes. The Matrix, Tomb Raider, and many of the movies which have come out in this genre have a definite video-game feel and that is what their target audience seems to like. And in video games, things aren't like they are in reality. Just like Balsamo talks about: this counter-culture likes to claim it is very different than reality but the gender norms are the same if not exaggerated. This makes me think about our very first class discussion about gender. People seem to like gender...it is one of the things that will probably never be irradicated. We may eventually become one race, but we will always want our different genders. Therefore in fantasy worlds gender is often exaggerated. The men are fantasizing about being the ultimate man or the geeky guy who gets the hot chick. And they are fantasizing about the hottest women they can create based on what their dominant culture says is desireable. Sci-fi, video games, and the computer world are very male dominated, and this is something that must be taken into account when we read and analyze these books.

posted by Sarah at 12:21 PM


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queen of angels is ceratinly a change from neuromancer but there are some similarities. i liken mary to molly, in that they are "transforms", i've also seen some of gibson's language pop up in qoa. we get a better picture of the society as a whole in qoa than in neuromancer, i'm really enjoying reading about day to day life in 1100-10111-11111111111. i want an arbeiter and home manager!!! the concept of therapied, untherapied, and natural individuals is very interesting to me and i want to learn more about these classifications. i am also intersted in the role of the Selectors, they are like the Eyes in hmt, but seem more feared by the citizens.

posted by amy at 12:16 PM


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Our discussion yesterday cleared up many cloudy feelings I had felt for Neuromancer. The matrix was another major help for me, although I have seen it many times before, I could now grasp ideas that were in the movie to better understand the book. Last night and this morning I finished up the reading due for today's class. It has a much different style of writing and the "mumbo jumbo" in Neuromancer is not as present, or at least it is explained thoroughly within the book. I am wondering if I enjoy this book more because the main character, Mary, is a woman. Because of this I may feel that I relate to her more easily.

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I want to start out with something funny that goes along with our discussion yesterday. Some guys were playing one of those video games with the "hot" girls and one of them said, "Oh my god she is so hot." I could not believe that he thought a cartoon character was hot. It really does not matter if the women is real or not if she has the right physical assests the man starts to have some kind of sexual fantasy about her. I also thought that watching the Matrix helped me to understand what was going on in the book. I got a much more visual image. I do think that Molly plays a male stereotype role in the novel, but I do not think that Case is a manly man. He seems very weak and dependent on people to guide him through everything that is happening. I would have to read this book again to understand the whole sci fi plot, but I could definately see gender issues in the novel.

posted by Abby at 9:45 AM


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Watching the Matrix in class Friday helped me to develop an appreciation of the movie itself - which I had only seen once when it first came out, and did not fully understand - as well as an added appreciation for the book. The movie helped me to visualize the rich and elusive description of Gibson's virtual world, while the book - with its own apt definition of the matrix as a "consensual hallucination" - helped me to grasp the concept behind "The Matrix" movie.

Quite a few similarities stood out for me. I was better able to visualize the concept of "jacking in," and "flatlining" became more fully explained. I liked Morpheus' explanation of cyberdeath: that if you die in virtual reality, you die in cold harsh reality as well - the body cannot survive without the mind. Perhaps the only way Neo overcomes his physical death is when he realizes that his virtual death was only as real as his mind chose to conceive it. His death is psychsomatic. Choosing to believe that the bullets are real or choosing to believe that the bullets are a mere fabrication of an elaborate computer program means the difference between life and death. Just as the enlightened child informs Neo "There is no spoon," neither are there bullets. Neo thus had to do away with all his preconceived notions of the nature of existence, and undeceive his mind in the matrix. His enlightenment was a triumph of mind over matter, and his resurrection an illustration of the limitless power of the mind.

In Neuromancer, we also see the power of the mind over the body. Case describes the body as "meat;" it is only when his mind transcends its tenement of flesh that he feels unfettered. Reveling in his disembodied consciousness, he feels free.

Another similarity I noticed between Neuromancer and The Matrix was the mention of the place Zion. In the former, it is a spacial colony inhabited by Rastafarians; in the latter, it is the one last human city, situated close to the earth's core. I find it interesting that a biblical reference is used in these sci-fi works; "The Matrix", indeed, is rife with such references. . . I wonder what connection is meant to be suggested by religion and prophecy in a sci-fi world. That humans, no matter how technologically advanced, will never abandon their spirituality? Or their dreams of paradise?

posted by Jane at 12:01 AM


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i really enjoyed today's discussion. i didn't get the chance to see the seducity site but i thought it was interesting that you can have your personality and communicative skills but not your body. i once got hooked on a game on the yahoo games site. there was a chat room you could talk in while you were playing and i talked to a lot of people using another name and basically became everything i'm not. even nasty users would ask kinky sexual questions and really get into not being themselves. as for video games the only one i've really gotten into is tekkin which is basically a beat the shit out of your opponent before he gets you. there are only two female fighters and both look how samantha described in class today (big boobs, small waist). i also enjoyed discussing women's empowerment in neuromancer. i saw molly as active and case as passive, like many of you did, and found it interesting that straylight, wintermute and artificial intelligence were developed by a woman. my only question is, who is marcus garvey? the name sounds familiar, but i can't place it.

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I have not yet finished the reading assignment for the evening, but I can already tell that I like the style that Queen of Angels is written in better than I liked the style of Neuromancer. I was a bit discouraged by Neuromancer, and was thinking that I didn't really like the Science Fiction genre as a whole, but I glad we are reading another book to show that may not b ethe case. It is not that technical or science fiction aspect of Neuromancer that I didn't like, but the language in the book was a bit hard to follow for me. Queen of Angels seems to be more clear, and I can read the text without feeling as though I need to re-read it.
I find the notion of the "therapied" and the "untherapied" very interesting, this is perhaps the way society could eventually become with the development of technology. Although this may be a somewhat perfect world, there is also the risk of all people becoming somewhat the same. Wouldn't that, along with our dependence on the therapy technology make us cyborgs?

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Lillian Liang
Professor Blackmon
English 360K
2 June 2003
I assume today we will continue the discussion of Neuromancer, so I am going to write something about Case-Molly relation, as it kind of relates to the question the teacher gave as a prompt in last Thursday’s class.
Molly is pretty tough and terrifying. But such women are a mainstay of modern sci fi or action fiction. Do they represent women's liberation? At least, as what we have agreed in class discussions, Molly is dominant, highly competent, and knowlegible (if not more knowlegible than Case). Are this kind of women really popular with readers?
Because the human-machine interface runs through the novel, we see Molly has a characteristic implant. Thus her eyes are inaccessible, masked, and inscrutable, but she can see others. This enrages Peter Riviera. Her fingernails are retractable, made of steel, which suggests her profession of “razor girls”.
If we compare Case with Molly, it is interesting to note the sex Case experiences differs from that Molly does, though she and Case have something important in common. What does Molly like about her relationship with Case? And after Case jacks in, he can experience the world from inside Molly's body without leaving cyberspace. So Case's mind is using Molly's body. So can we say Molly is a "meat puppet," because her conscious mind is disconnected from her body? And actually the story makes clear what Molly has to gain by remaining an outlaw. Molly has a theory about how Wintermute is manipulating her.
Why then Molly finally leaves Case? I read some criticisms recently which argue that male authors frequently imagine highly desirable but dangerous women who get devastatingly involved with their protagonists and then leave. There is, to be sure, something bittersweet in the final sentence: “He never saw Molly again”. Does this mean that Case will revert to his older self, or unromantic self? Then Molly isn’t as dominant in the end as she looks like all through the novel. But Molly and Case at least survive and they can live happily, though separately.



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Okay, so as I fumbled through this text, I really didn't understand very much along the way. The material was very dense and i think I would have to read it another 5 times in order to understand it. I also think that if you want to find the topic of gender in this novel you really REALLY have to dig for it. I saw no overt references to gender in this book. I mean, it CAN be argued that Molly possessed characteristics that are more masculine than feminine, but she also possessed characteristics that were more machine than human. How can we assume that someone who is machine-like could even have feminine or masculine characteristics? I did notice her power through sexual attraction (you go girl) and I mean come on, as women we all know we have it in some way, shape or form. This definitely characterizes her as a woman. I mean, it's one of the FEW advantages we have over men these days. We may not be able to get the salary we deserve in the real world, but we have the ability to flirt our way up the payroll. Sure, this isn't the most respectable way to do it, but it's not like being qualified has anything to do with how much we get paid. Anyway, off of that, Molly does have some female characteristics as well as masculine characteristics, but perhaps her masculine characteristics stem from her mechanical side....Think about it....machine vs. man.....i'm sure we could find more than one similarity.

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Neuromancer, it seems to me that it is some ways an idealized society where gender and sexual preference are no longer issues. Case for example seem to be largely desexualized, due mostly to his passivity throughout the book, also he seems preoccupied with things like jacking in and doing drugs. But then again with all the meat puppets and thing perhaps I am wrong about there being a desexualizing trend this book. There does seem to be a lot of escapism, for everybody through implants, the matrix, and drugs. What are these people escaping from is it generissues or is it some other source of pain?


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To be honest this is the first true science fiction novel I have ever read, and it was a little tough for me to get through. However, I did think that some of the characters were very interesting and that there were some good things happening in the plot. It seems like two stories almost, one which is real life, and I can get through that easily. But when they delve into the technical aspect, I am reading and re-reading the text to get any understanding. I did find that I was a little bit disappointed by the ending. It seems like they were working towards something that didn't serve much purpose. This novel reminded me of the movie Citizen Cane. While I didn't like th eplot that much, it was probably so ahead of it's time that the concepts and the foresight are probably more important than the story itself.

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I must admit I am not a fan of science fiction. I have finished Neuromancer. But I find myself rather confused. How does it address the issue of gender and technology? Is it the imagination that all characters are living more than one life - one in the real world and another in the virtual world - that connects the novel to cyborg feminism? Or that, the protagonist, Case, cannot hold one woman when Zone said, "You can't keep too good track of your women, can you, Case. Keep losin' 'em, one way or another" (Neuromancer 144). When the author states through Zone's mouth again that "Lindas are a generic product in my line of work… She loved you. I know that. For the little she was worth, she loved you. You couldn't handle it. She's dead" (Neuromancer 144), is Gibson suggesting that love in the virtual world is real, and that it defines existence of a virtual character? I doubt that, because it would go against the concerns of cyborg feminism?
When we consider the difference between Neuromancer the boy and Riviera, the only difference is the virtual boy has a personality - "I need no mask to speak with you. Unlike my brother. I create my own personality. Personality is my medium" (Neuromancer 259). Here the virtual personality defines the virtual figure. Does this reflect the issue of warranting that Balsomo points out regarding Gibson's first sf novel, like the issue of warranting in The Matrix - death in either world brings death to the character, both the physical and the virtual part of its existence? Though Linda is a construct placed in the virtual world, the boy tells Case he could not control the virtual Linda's thoughts - "I do not know her thoughts. You were wrong, Case. To live here is to live. There is no difference" (Neuromancer 258). Does this imply virtual existence has empowered women? If so, it goes against the boy's words in the next page - "You won when you walked away from on the beach. She was my last line of defense. I die soon, in one sense. As does Wintermute. As surely as Riviera does…" (Neuromancer 259). Is the author suggesting that the ability to tell the real world from the constructed, virtual world make Case win in his battle of wisdom against the powerful AI? Does that also inform the film The Matrix? But again, that would be contradicting the idea of cyborg feminism which celebrates the extended existence of human beings. You see, the novel and the movie are both very puzzling to me.
The only feminist connection that I can pick out of the novel is the fact that Molly has been an active actor. She physically goes into the dangerous sphere to kill Riviera and search for the ultimate code. And the supposed hero is always carried within Molly's body. So we can say Case is always passive. And the designer of the powerful AI is a woman - 3Jane's mother. 3Jane knows the secret code. The fact that a woman, not a man, creates and maintains the powerful AI tells the feminine nature of fluidity of our life, and that women's innate ability to grasp the essence of communication technologies. Viewed against the condescending belief of women's incapacity in mastering technologies, Gibson's creation and ideas carry great importance.

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After reading Balsamo's article on The Virtual Body in Cyberspace and her describing female characters in cyberspace as being "beautiful, sexualized, albeit sometimes violently powerful women", reminded me of how females are portrayed in video games. The first person to pop into my mind, was Laura Croft of the Tomb Raider games. Her body is definitely sexualized. Her body is as unreal as a Barbie doll's is. And she is scantily dressed as well. Such trends are also seen in games such as Mortal Kombat and other fighting games. All the females have extremely large breasts and small waists. They're overly sexualized. Molly is definitely sexualized as well. She is seen as wearing tight, form fitting clothing to show off her sexuality. And besides this, she is portrayed as being sexually aggressive and a tease. Both are qualities that many men find sexually attractive.

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Although Neuromancer was a difficult novel to get in to, after a few chapters, when Armitage and Molly appear and the action starts to pick-up, things get more interesting and it becomes fun to read. I began to understand some of Gibson's terms as the novel moved along. Examples: a "coffin" is a small room and "ice" is an encrypted security code. Although I still don't have a complete mental picture of what Freeside or the Villa Straylight look like, I was able to piece together a good enough image to flow with the narrative.
The novel has an interesting ending. Molly and Case are back where they started: alone. I find it significant that Gibson doesn't go in to detail about Case and Molly's relationship after the job is done. This seems to imply that Case and Molly are cyborg selves incapable of "true love." I say this because it seems that as the action progresses Case is very concerned with Molly's wellbeing although the reverse of that is not really shown.
Sandy Stone's idea of "technosociality" definitely applies to Gibson's novel. This is "the state in which technology and nature are the same thing," (36). Molly and Case are technosocial beings since Case is usually jacked in to the matrix and Molly's body contains electronic technologies (glasses and razor nails). With regards to today's reading by Balsamo, her discussion of gender in Neuromancer on page 129 was helpful in sparking my thought on the subject. Also, There seem to be more VR products on today's market such as digital cameras, game cubes, and medical equipment. Although I still think the Web is the largest virtual environment/cyberspace I don't think of it as a product. To me it is more of a virtual entity accessed through and constructed by computer based products (ex. Internet access, programs).

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Watching The Matrix made it a little easier to read/understand Neuromancer for me...I feel it's a little shameful that it takes a blockbuster to make a book written years before less difficult to read, but I do feel that it made the book read quicker and a little less stressed...When it comes to the gender issues within this book, I suppose I'm a bit naive...In response to what Shana said...I see Molly as being assertive, strong, and knowing what she is doing...I guess I see it as this...in any situation where there is something shady going down, there has to be people in the dark...certain people shouldn't be aware of what all is going on...this is true for either sex...not just women though...maybe I'm just applying this too much to a "real" situation...but I feel that if I were in a situation like her, I wouldn't really want to know everything...I would rather rely on my own decisions...But, that's just me I suppose...

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so, in reading this book and watching the matrix i have noticed myself suspecting small things, like deja vu. i question my world and if i would choose the matrix over the free world. and, because of case and molly i have a strong urge to smoke! like shana, i haven't really thought of gender because no one really seems to be fully human like case is. everyone is physically altered in some way and for me that blocks any female/male issues i have. i'm almost finished with the book. i find reading it for hours at a time helps me to understand it better than reading pieces of it. i am really anxious to learn if armitage is a good or bad guy. i'm really enjoying the book, although it's slightly difficult to understand at times. watching the matrix really helped visualize what happens to case when he jacks in to the simstim. i think trinity and molly are similar characters. they both play important roles, mentally and physically for their story's main characters and extreme leather wearing ass kickers. i think we don't notice their femininity because they act more masculine because they fight and kill and remain basically emotionless. i agree with shana that they are dependent but on the other hand they are independent because they chose to be who and where they are.

posted by jamie at 12:47 AM


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Well I have now finished reading Neuromancer and while I can't say i understood it all I can say that I did find it interesting. Before our writing excercise in class on thursday about the role of gender in this book I can honestly say I had been spending all my time on trying to figure out what was going on in the novel that I hadn't payed much attention to the role of gender. However, as I got towards the end of the novel and it was revealed that 3Jane's mother is the one who designed the program (for lack of a better word) that Case and Molly and that crew were trying to break into, and 3Jane is the one who held the password. In this way, women played a powerful role in the novel, it's just hidden throughout most of the story.

In response to Tory's question I feel that the misconceptions she was addressing come mainly from the media. "Bra-burning bitches" are a lot more "entertaining," it's what sells. Additionally, just like racism, it is learned from parents. I really don't know a good way to "shatter" these myths. People with one-sided views tend to be the hard to convince otherwise. I guess all I can say right now is to educate them about other views in a way that doesn't offend them and hope that it sinks in one day. Not the most optimistic view I know, but it seems to me to be one of the things you have to realize on your own. :-)

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Samantha makes a good point in saying that "homemakers can be feminist, too." It is a common misconception to label feminists as "man-haters" who do not want to have married partners or children. Additionally, a woman (or man for that matter) can be both feminine and feminist. I have a hard time getting past this misconception with my own students. They automatically want to label feminists as "bitches." In fact, one of my freshman classes told me the two words were synonymous. Where do you think these misconceptions come from? What are some good ways to (painlessly) shatter these myths when talking to those who have a one-sided view of feminism? I would love to hear what all of you think about the subject.

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Wow, 2 other people posted while I was writing that last response.

Laura, I am glad that I chose The Matrix, it gave people the chance to see it with all new eyes. After reading Stone and Gibson we can see where a lot of the ideas for contemporary Sci-Fi films came from. Gibson's work is definitely a seminal one.

Shana's right there are a lot fewer women in this book than in HMT, but their roles are not necessarily less important. The fun in this book is that it is going to take a lot more work to look at gender roles. We've got cowboys, samauris, mothers, fathers, naughty boys, and evil men. I am really looking forward to discussion on Monday!

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More block responses :-)
I am glad that people are getting more understanding of Neuromancer after discussion. I hope that there is more understanding after watching the film on Friday.

Sarah wrote:
I have gotten a litle behind with missing class and being sick, but I am curious as to why it seems we have skimmed over Balsamo's article about public pregnancies. Both of the presentations on Wednesday were about the article, but then the class discussion was almost entirely about HMT. And it seems the blogs have pretty much jumped from HMT to Neuromancer...but here's what I think and it will probably offend some...I have a huge problem with the common feminist trend to only fight for reproductive freedoms that involve the block of reproduction or the end of pregnancy. All women are not the same as we have been reading. There are many women who desperately want to have babies and feel they will be complete as mothers and housewives. The feminist movement should not only fight for the career women who want pills and abortions. It should also be fighting for the mothers and caretakers of our children. Personally I think the women fighting for the insurance companies to cover their fertility treatments deserve more of our support than the crack head who doesn't care about her baby at all.

Yes, and you missed a great discussion :-) I think that far from skimming over Balsamo's article we have given it more attention than some of the other articles. Unfortunately, with a Maymester course we have very little time to spend on any one piece. We only spent 3 days on the HMT all together so I thought 2 days on Balsamo was extraordinary. The critical pieces that we read are serving to contextualize the literature and that's probably why more people are focusing on the fiction in the blogs. Unfortunately with an abbreviated schedule we rarely have all of the time that we would like to focus on everything that we would like to.

I have to disagree with two notions here, 1. that there is a "common feminist thread" and 2. that it is more concerned with birth control. Isn't the main idea behind feminism equality. While I think that the more controversial issues like birth control and abortion rights come to the fore more often, they are not the focus (as such) of the movement. There are so many veins of feminism/womanism in the world that I think that it is impossible to say that they are all concerned with reproduction and not with supporting women who want to be mothers and homemakers. Feminism is more about the freedom to make that choice . Homemakers can be feminist too :-)

I think that we also need to be careful of making generalizations about people. Just because a woman uses drugs (and drug addiction like alcoholism is a disease) doesn't mean that she is not concerned about the fetus she is carrying. Unfortunately, society tells us that women who do drugs, drink alcohol, caffiene, smoke, work too much, don't rest enough, eat enough (or well enough) must not care about their fetus. This is something that is heavily influenced by our current hegemonic patriarchial society. One question we might want to ask is if we (as a society) are so concerned about (pre)natal health why all of the welfare and health care cuts. I think Cat made a good point when she said South Carolina chose to imprison rather than help Ms. Whitner.


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I am slowly but surely making my way through this book. As I've moved along in my reading I've noticed that there are less and less women present in this story. In fact Molly is the only one i remember encountering for quite awhile. I also found it interesting that while she is very strong physically and emotionally and seems to play a large role in the novel, she, like everyone except Armitage are left in the dark about what much of the plan of action is or who is really running the show. This lack of knowledge could, on some levels, make her weak. She has to put all her trust in whomever is in charge and believe that what they are telling her to do is right. I just found it really interesting that on one hand she can be seen as a very strong and independent woman but on the other had she's not because she has no idea of what the plan involves except for what they are doing at that time and is dependent on Armitage to tell her what's going on.

posted by Shana at 10:20 AM


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By watching "The Matrix" on Friday, not that I haven't seen it before, but it really cleared up some things. First of all, when I started the first third of the novel, I wasn't sure if I was supposed to be thinking the matrix was the same thing as it is in the film or if I was misinterpreting because I had seen the film. By understanding what the matrix is through the film as well as our first class discussion on Thursday, I am much more clear on the meaning of the matrix in the book. I am really glad that Samantha decided upon this film because it allowed me to review it in a new way and relate it to the novel.

posted by Laura at 11:01 PM


wFriday, May 30, 2003


(On Neoromancer, Resent)
However, our multiplicity nature would not have caught our attention if it had not surfaced on a large social, even global scale. I think that explains Stone's emphasis on the word "collective." The power of the World Wide Web becomes most amazing and powerful when data can be transferred in the network to almost anywhere in an instant. In this huge network, any user can jack in and out anytime. Therefore, the next keyword is "consensual." All the users consent to abide by the rule. If anyone breaks the rule, they create a disaster.
The nature of such multiplicity and fluidity is feminine, not masculine. That, in my opinion, ties communication technologies to feminist studies. The multitudinous users of the Internet only reflect one aspect of our collective multiplicity. The fact that users can collectively launch an attack on the Sense/Net Pyramid manifests another multiple aspect (Neuromancer 62). Those multiple users succeed by jamming the system with instantaneous overdoses of information. These overdoses are also multiple, hence unruly in nature. The attack Gibson imagined in 1984 has predicted Internet attacks in our present world. And we have already experienced that.
Another area where multiplicity plays a key role is the virus attack that Case inflicted on the mainframe of the System/Net Pyramid. After the Panther Moderns paralyze the Pyramid's alerting system, Case "triggered his second program. A carefully engineered virus attacked the code fabric screening primary custodial commands for the sub-basement that housed the Sense/Net research materials" (Neuromancer 63). This is another accurate presage of a computer virus in our day. We now know that a virus attacks a single computer by infinitely multiplying a preset code and the virus spreads very rapidly over the Internet. Moreover, a virus works like a mole. It is first recognized by a computer and then proceeds to do great harm. The fluidity nature and multiplying speed scare the orderly mentality of the patriarchal nature, which in the novel is the military.
The illusive nature of the web shows itself also in the difficulty of tracking the originator. When someone stages an attack or resistance, it is almost impossible to find that person. The virtual entity may a person or many individuals. That is best illustrated in Deane's words - "let's say you are dealing with a small part of the man's left brain. Difficult to say if you are dealing with the man at all, in a case like that" (Neuromancer 120). In the novel, the author explains that by giving Deane the ability to have another life after being shot by Case. So, Deane might be a virtual entity. He simply cannot die, because he is constructed. In our present world, even if one constructor is caught, numerous others may step in and construct that entity. No one knows how many constructors are out there jacking in and off the web.
The real significance of such fluidity resides in their ability to stage resistance. We know the characters in the novel are resisting the patriarchal military for its betrayal in a special force activity. Armitage's constructed identity is Corto - "Corto gradually understood that the testimony he gave was instrumental in saving the careers of three officers directly responsible of the suppression of reports on the building of the emp installation at Kirsten" (Neuromancer 83).
The fluidity nature prompts Gibson to use Molly as the primary actor in the novel. Other males act only as her auxiliaries.

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In response to the many troubles we are all having in reading _Neuromancer_, I think that, like we discussed in class the other day, the book wants us to "jack in" just as Case must "jack in" to the matrix. In other words, we need to try to shed our "meat" as well as the limitations of our imaginations. This book is hard to get into because we do not understand every line, every word, every chapter. But, instead of focusing on getting a definite meaning out of the book, I think we should let the book _be_ and try to simply _experience_ it. I don't know if this makes any sense at all--but I promise that by the end of the book we will feel that we have a more complete understanding of the book. It's almost like reading a foreign language--you can translate word-for-word. Instead, you have to look for context clues, words you know, etc. M

Maybe this approach will help some of us who are having troubles.

posted by Tory at 12:58 PM


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Lillian Liang
Professor Blackmon
English 360K
May 29 2003
I am really in a mess today, so I can only blurt out some few lines here. I will try to write more after class.
I am still doubtful about the setting of the story. Is Japan used to represent modernity and future or something else? Chiba is not a big city at all, it is also kind of decayed. Why Chiba? I agree what a student said in class: you need to let your imagination sore when reading it, though I am still often stuck with Gibson’s inventions in the book. I agree that the book moves smoothly, though the plot is a little loose. It isn’t clear to me -- who exactly is Neuromancer? I am still wondering its theme. What generation does the book represent? But the story is good: computer cowboy completes a suspenseful mission.
I agree that the novel depicts the human-machine interface created by the widespread use of computers and computer networks. Everything about the world of the book is built around the Matrix. And the novel manages to grab you and pull you into its incredible depth, like what you experience in the Matrix.
I see in chpt 3 Gibson’s many satires of modern civilization. The Washington D. C, krill, dome, "Dixie Flatline's construct", etc.

Works Cited
Gibson, William. Neuromancer. New York: Ace Books, 1984.


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I have gotten a litle behind with missing class and being sick, but I am curious as to why it seems we have skimmed over Balsamo's article about public pregnancies. Both of the presentations on Wednesday were about the article, but then the class discussion was almost entirely about HMT. And it seems the blogs have pretty much jumped from HMT to Neuromancer.

The article about public pregnancies really struck a chord with me. I am having a bit of a problem with the blog system in reconciling the public nature of it with the private idea of a journal, but here's what I think and it will probably offend some...

The idea of a public pregnancy make a lot of sense to me. I consider myself to be a feminist, and somewhat radical on many issues. I just don't see how anyone can say that the fetus completely doesn't matter. Whether abortion should be legal or not has been an ongoing debate, but lets put that aside for now. If a woman does in fact decide to keep her fetus alive until it is born, then I would say that legally she should have to take that fetus into account when making decisions. No, the fetus should not become more important than the woman, but nor should the woman be more important than the fetus if it is being carried to term. To use drugs or participate in activities that are going to harm the fetus and continue harming it after it is born and throughout its life is just cruel. Once a woman had decided for whatever reason to carry her pregnancy to term, she must treat that fetus as a human life.

And yes, the pregnancy is public. The woman is no longer just walking around as an individual having little to no effect on those around her. She is going to bring a life into the world which will become part of our society. We as a species have a vested interest in the well-being of this new life. It will become part of our gene pool. In our economy, it will be someone's financial burden for the next 18 years and possibly for longer if it is born with developmental problems.

Whenever a person brings a new life into the world, he or she is affecting more than just one person. Recklessly putting one's own wants above those of a helpless dependent is selfish. This is what our society seems to be deciding is one of our morals. This is also a fact for many other animal species where the parent will sacrifice itself for the life of its young.

I have a huge problem with the common feminist trend to only fight for reproductive freedoms that involve the block of reproduction or the end of pregnancy. All women are not the same as we have been reading. There are many women who desperately want to have babies and feel they will be complete as mothers and housewives. The feminist movement should not only fight for the career women who want pills and abortions. It should also be fighting for the mothers and caretakers of our children. Personally I think the women fighting for the insurance companies to cover their fertility treatments deserve more of our support than the crack head who doesn't care about her baby at all.

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In response to Neuromancer: this has been a difficult book for me to read and I’ve been reading really slowly which is starting to bother me. I’m trying to get through it as quickly as I can. What other people who have read the book said in class yesterday did help. I’m trying not to pay so much attention to details although it seems they’re all important and I’m trying to go with the flow and not get caught up trying to understand everything. The vocabulary is interesting especially words like “ice” and “coffin” that already have preconceived meanings. Like others, I can’t believe this book was written in 1984…I was only two years old! Gibson’s insight into the future is amazing.

In response to what Lillian mentioned about Molly being made for male reader’s pleasure and hence market value…this might be true. But, I think it may have been easier for Gibson to construct such a powerful character if the character was female. We’ve talked a lot about the female body and female gender in class and from these discussions and the readings I understand the female body and gender to be totally constructed and that for as long as we know this is how it has always been. So since the male body and male gender is less subject to construction a male version of Molly would not be as believable or interesting to the mostly male audience at the time Gibson wrote Neruomancer. Having the Molly character be female also provides Gibson with variety in male/female characters and allows him to create male/female interaction without which the novel would be very boring.

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I am having a hard time going from HTM to Neuromancer. It is definately not something that I would choose to read, but after the discussion yesterday, I feel much more excited about the book. I now have a more visual image of where Case and Molly are and what is going on. I am very excited to see what happens to Case considering his addiciton to the Matrix. It is hard to tell who to trust in the novel and that is interesting. I am exicited about trying to relate the movie today to the novel. The challenge of reading this novel is becoming less painful as our discussion progress in class. I am also curious about the coffin thing if someone has an answer.

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Although we talked about the Balsamo article on public pregnancies earlier this week I wanted to comment on this issue since the article, Cat’s presentation, class discussion, and blogs have all kept me thinking about it. In response to Tory’s question I do find myself gazing at pregnant women because I find such a physical state to be quite fascinating. I feel guilty for it but like Tory I am in wonder since I have never experienced being pregnant. I think it is hard for a woman to keep her pregnancy “private” since her body changes in such a way that it is completely obvious that she is pregnant. I understand though that it is social attitudes which make pregnancy public. Jaime talked abut her sister. I would hate to have strangers touching me and watching me give birth and all of the other things her sister experienced. While I read the article and it discussed surveillance and medical technology and intervention I began to get worried. I would like to have a child some day and what I was reading scared me. I don’t like doctors as it is and I avoid them as much as I can so the control portrayed in the article was frightening. What Cat talked about in her presentation was interesting. I think our government spends too much time and resources turning drug users into criminals instead of trying to help them get better because really drug use is a personal problem. Also, when I read about the birthing chair in HMT is seemed strange but now I realize it is much more natural than lying down. The talk about midwifery was interesting as well.

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Wintermute is a an interesting character to me. When he and Case get to talk we find out that he is basically a computer program and he has been using Armitage as a (meat) puppet the whole time. This is interesting because here we have a different play on the boundaries of cyborg. Instead of a human using something mechanical in order to do or accomplish a task we have something mechanical (wintermute) using something human (Corto/Armitage) to do or accomplish a task. This might show that although humans rely heavily on technology (very heavilly) it seems that (at least in this book) the machines also rely heavily on humans. Also, I noticed that there seems to be so many things in the future to get addicted to or high from. Even Case, with his trick pancreas, eventually finds something that can alter his senses besides jacking in. On a side note I was wondering about Riviera, he has hologram tricks but does it say how he has these powers, like is he using a machine or does he have some kind of implant inside him?

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since i missed class yesterday i missed the whole matrix conversation. but, in reading the blogs i agree. when i started reading the book my thought was, "oh, crap. i'm never going to get into this." but as i read on i find it really holds my attention. molly is an interesting character for me. her relationship with case threw me, but i guess cyborg sex is the thing in that world. i wish i could better visualize the world this takes place in. especially witht the coffins, are they like little apartments? i'm excited to find out exactly how each relationship plays out and what's in store for case. this book makes me have a lot of suspicion for every character and situation. will molly end up deceiving case like nick did to offred? also, my idea of a cyborg is quickly evolving, thanks to molly and some of the other characters. visualization, as i said before, is difficult for me especially when it talks about location. BAMA, for instance, i think is in the US, is Amsterdam where it used to be?
all in all i am enjoying this read. it's completely different from anything i've ever read. i'm letting go of preconceptions but keeping in mind any sci-fi i've ever seen just to give me a better idea of case and molly's surroundings.

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Langdon Winner's testimony to the Committee on Science of the U.S. House of Representatives on The Societal Implications of Nanotechnology is an interesting read and gives us some insight into some of the current thoughts on technology (and its implications) in our current society.

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I was curious if anyone could explain to me what "ice" is? It's mentioned several time. I'm guessing it's some sort of security like a firewall or something. But to add to our discussion today about people taking on certain identities on-line, many people I know feel more comfortable socializing with people on-line than they do in real life. It allows them to be themselves. It also makes rejection less harsh. Because it's not like you have to talk or see this person ever again. All you do is block them or stop responding to their messages.

posted by Amanda at 12:33 AM


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I definitely have to agree with everyone who has said that this book is hard to read. I am glad that i finally saw the movie the Matrix though because it has made some of it easier to visualize. I skimmed through later parts and it looks like it gets better so I am really hoping that after i get through these first few chapters i'll start to enjoy it more. It has been a little better since we talked about letting go of preconceptions and not necessarily trying to understand every litte thing.

posted by Shana at 10:16 PM


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You'll notice that I have changed the layout of the blog a bit so that it is easier to see individual posts and the dates that they were published. Hope it helps.

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No need to apologize for not being a "huge sci-fi fan", Eileen. Some other people have blogged about being a bit disoriented (like Case while "riding" Molly for the first time) by the language. As my post below says and Tory pointed out in class today, sometimes we just need to release preconceptions and kind of go for it :-)

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I agree with all of you who have said that Neuromancer is like The Matrix...(Especially since they use that term in the first chapter)...I find this book so far confusing...I don't know if it's the names, or just the science-like wording...but it's a bit hard for me to keep interested in...Have any of you read ahead yet and found it to be pretty engaging after the first few chapters? I'm just finding it hard to read this one...(Maybe it's because I'm not a huge sci-fi fan...sorry!) Just curious...thanks!

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Here are my mass responses again :-)

Nick said:
When I read this I immediately thought of the movie "The Matrix" and lost a lot of respect for the writers of that movie...Gibson is good at making all the things that they use in the novel so far believable and conceivable. The technology is a little complicated but that only it makes it more believable. What intrigued me most was the ability to gene splice, and switch body parts and just the medical advances altogether. They seemed so realistic and it got me wondering if Gibson's vision of medicine in the future would ever come close to that because of all the things so far the new wave medicine and use of the body as a machine (i.e. eye implants) came the closest to our eventual medical evolution.

This is a great point. I, too, am still astounded by the fact that this book was written in 1984 and coined the term cyberspace! Gibson does seem to be a visionary and many of his ideas have taken off and been integrated into other books and movies, especially with all of the recent interest in cyberspace in books and movies. The Matrix is a great example.

Laura writes:
Also, what is the meaning of a "coffin" in this book? I don't think I ever figured that out. I just keep thinking of this vampire crawling into a coffin everytime the word is mentioned. Maybe it's the use of certain terms that is keeping me off track with this story.

Yes, reading sci-fi for the first time can be disorienting. Sometimes you do have to just release your current understanding that you have of words and concepts and allow new meanings to come in. Class discussion is also a great time to gain clarity. BTW the coffins are actually beds of a sort.

Amy writes:
i do find it challenging but i think he forces us to use our imaginations and really think about things, which can be fun, i can't wait to see how others interpret some of the words he uses, it will make for some interesting discussion. i have read neuromancer already and am reading it again because of the language, i don't feel comfortable discussing it in detail because i didn't pay enough attention to the context in some areas, i assumed that some of the words would be explained later and they are not, so hopefully this time around things will become clearer.

I agree wholeheartedly. The language and the way that we interpret it will definitely give us all different understandings of the text. The fun part will be arguing it out in class and seeing other points of view!

Lillian asks a great question:
Molly is depicted as a dominant, independent, competent woman. Such women are very common in contemporary action fiction. From a market point of view, is Gibson using her to entertain male readers?

Is Molly a big draw for the male audience? Who, predominantly, is the audience for sci-fi (or was in 1984)? She is strong, but still extremely sexy. What "samauri" would actually wear skin tight leather pants?

Xianfeng writes:
The development of the cyberspace re-crystallizes the multiple nature of our existence. To me, being multiple poses as a resistance to the binary restricting culture...The possibility of constructing a multiple personality renders communication technologies democratic in nature. Everyone knowing its language can use it to construct another sphere to express their meanings, to tell their own stories to the world and get instant feedback. In one word, cyberspace provides another venue for people to get heard, to break out of the control the society has sought to impose on them.

I've got to play devil's advocate here and ask, what about people who don't have access to the technology? What about people who don't have the economic ability to purchase communication technologies or don't have the knowledge necessary to use the technology even if they can physically access it?

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Yesterday in class we discussed the reason for the section entitled "Historical Notes" at the end of The Handmaid's Tale. I myself thought that this section was enlightening and added to, rather than detracted from, the story. What became most apparent to me was the arrogance of these future academians. I believe the final line, which claims that it is difficult to decipher the voices of the past in the "clearer light of our own day," was meant by Atwood to mirror our own hypocrisy. Those of the present day often believe that they hold all the answers, answers to the many questions which humanity has wrestled throughout the years. We always consider ourselves far more advanced than those of the "primitive" past, and, all too often, believe ourselves beyond reproach. Past societies probably labored under the same delusion when their own past was the present. Atwood presents this superior sentiment as a potentially dangerous one; this very belief in social superiority spawned the Gileadean regime. The Sons of Jacob believed that the pre-Gileadean society, with its decadence and liberality, was inferior to the society they themselves wished to construct. The Commander justifies their superior stance to Offred: "We thought we could do better," he insists (211). It was this arrogant insistence, an assertion of the superiority of their own creed, which resulted in the construction of the oppressive Gileadean regime . . . Thus, Atwood is not trying to suggest that the world in which the academians exist holds the key to utopia; just because they live in a far advanced time does not mean they have all the answers. Rather, she might be warning against the danger of their notion of their own superiority. While we should never forget the past, neither should we consider ourselves above making the same mistakes, either.

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What I found striking about the world of Chiba and Night City in Gibson's Neuromancer was the restlessness, the never-ceasing buzz and frenzy of activity. As Gibson describes it, "Night City was like a deranged experiment in social Darwinism, designed by a bored researcher who kept one thumb permanently on the fast-forward button" (7). Indeed, the ambience seems like an explosive result of a science experiment over which the researcher had no control. Genetically and mechanically modified beings walk the streets, byproducts of vast scientific and technological experimentation. While I find these cyborgian beings fascinating, I sometimes find their diminished humanity chilling. Mechanical prostheses, muscle grafts, optical implants, and especially, what Chase terms "vatgrown skin," I find both chilling and intriguing. That flesh itself could be scientifically and technologically cultivated seems unfathomable to me; that something so essentially human could be fabricated is at once both wondrous and disconcerting. But, applying Gibson's use of the word "Darwinism" to the scene, it is not unnatural nor improbable that we, as a species, evolve. As Darwin himself would have contended, humans are not exempt from the force of evolution.
In Gibson's futuristic world, technology exists everywhere, even imbedded and grafted into humanity. Holograms are a thing of reality, and other realities exist outside reality itself. The world seems to be florescently lit, alive with the glow of myriad neon lights. Even nature has been stamped with the unnatural glow of artificial light; the sky itself is described as a "television sky." It seems to emit no natural light of its own; the sun is never described. The heavens seem to exude no life or warmth: "the sky above the port was the color of television, tuned to a dead channel," reads the opening line of Neuromancer. With all the suffusion of technology, nature has been almost completely crowded out. Even the grass in the courtyard of Cheap Hotel is plastic.
The setting of the clinic in which Case is taken to undergo his neural operation gives the reader some glimpse of nature, as a "cluster of sleek pavilions separated by small formal gardens" (29). However, the gardens are tended by a robot crab, which perhaps somewhat visually disrupts the "natural" ambience of flowers and foliage. But then again, a garden itself is constructed; it does not naturally appear, but must be landscaped and cultivated. There are many aspects of what we term "nature," even today, that are NOT untouched nature. Gibson's ultra-technological world lends itself to the idea that nothing in nature is pristine; perhaps we are under the delusion in our present-day world that this is not the case. But it is, and Gibson's stark contrast of the natural vs. the ultra-technological emphasizes this. Pristine "natural" nature is often an illusion, because nature has been largely married to technology; thus, nature, like the human hybrids that people the world of Neuromancer, is cyborgian.


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What get my attention when I read Stone's "Collective Structures" are the three spheres of existence of an individual in the society - the biological, the cultural, and the virtual spaces (Stone 41-42). But, in final analysis, the virtual space also belongs to the cultural sphere because in the virtual sphere, individuals are making meaning for themselves; only such constructions are realized through codes of communication technologies. So, the virtual sphere is actually an extension of the cultural sphere.
When Stone states that "the technosocial, the social mode of the computer nets, evokes unruly multiplicity as an integral part of social identity" (Stone 42), she reasserts the multiple nature of existence to individuals in the society. But, the patriarchal culture tends always to stripe people of their multiplicity by restricting them in a specific grid, a cultural phenomena that Foucault has exposed in the Birth of the Prison. The binary way of thinking of the patriarchal culture is mainly accountable for that. Stone terms the dividing technology "location technology" (43). With that, the patriarchal civilization has sought to pin everyone down, especially women.
The development of the cyberspace re-crystallizes the multiple nature of our existence. To me, being multiple poses as a resistance to the binary restricting culture. Stone acknowledges that "multiplicity alone … does not in and of itself constitute a successful resistance" (43), nonetheless it is a necessary and significant step towards staging fruitful resistance against the patriarchal nature of the culture. The multiple personality enabled and made more noticeable by the cyberspace poses a great threat to the patriarchal culture which is all for control and order. That is why multiple personality it is given a bad name - "disorder."
The possibility of constructing a multiple personality renders communication technologies democratic in nature. Everyone knowing its language can use it to construct another sphere to express their meanings, to tell their own stories to the world and get instant feedback. In one word, cyberspace provides another venue for people to get heard, to break out of the control the society has sought to impose on them. It is " a radical rewriting of the bounded individual" (43) in society. The computer technologies are beneficial to both and constructors and consumers of the information, provided we guard against the abusers who exploit the technologies for their ulterior motives.

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Lillian Liang
Professor Blackmon
English 360K
May 29 2003
I am not a sophisticated SF reader, but I know the typical pattern of SF or also of Hollywood movies is a strong but lonely hero completes missions impossible to help remove disasters falling on to the vast masses of people. I didn’t finish the novel, so I am not sure in what ways is Neuromancer away from this pattern? The story itself so far seems easy to understand, though Gibson’s style kind of evades me. Is this what people usually mean by it is not what the story is that counts, but how the story is told that counts? His narrative techniques are ok to me, though his terminology stops the natural flow when I read. Take a few examples from the very first few chapters. Why he uses “meat” instead of “flesh”? What does “coffin hotel” suggest? What relation does “a Sprawl voice and a Sprawl joke” (3) have with the urban sprawl phenomena? What is "French orbital fatigues" (9)? What is a "simstim deck” (11)? What is a “taser”? What is “EMP”? I know that his imagery or terms more often must have carried symbolic or at least emotional connotations, like to call Case a “cyberspace cowboy”? (By the way, how is a cyberspace cowboy similar to or different from a traditional cowboy?). I learned a few years Japanese, so I am glad this little knowledge comes in handy now. For instance I can see immediately the implications of “sarariman” (10), “Gaijin”, “Shin” (10) in the text.
Cyberspace is a “base camp” (Stone 39) for Haraway’s cyborg world. Stone points out that we need to “venture not into the heart of “nature” in search of redemption, but rather into the heart of “technology” in search of nature” (Stone 38). “The interaction between humans and machines” (Stone 36) surfaces quite often in the very fist few chapters. Ratz said to Case that “you get maybe too artistic; you wind up in the clinic tanks, spare parts” (5). Case’s “prosthetic arm” is mentioned time and time again, and I notice that this term is also used in Stone’s article a few times. Readers need to remember that by then, organ transplantations have become quite common.
The opening sentence "The sky above the port was the color of television, tuned to a dead channel" (3) is really great. By paring nature to technology, Gibson not only sets the tone of the narrative, but also creates an environment deeply rooted in technology and cyberspace. "Case," the name of the protagonist, could suggest a lawsuit, a detective story, but whatever it is, it gives the book a clinic tone. What kind of man is him? Is he a hero? I guess not. But when does this “case” begin and when does it close? Why does this “case” happen in Japan or in Chiba particularly? Any reason why Japan is selected instead of any other countries? Machinery is introduced through Ratz's stainless steel teeth also—ugly looking but commonplace in Communist Eastern Europe. I appreciate Gibson’s satire here.
As for feminist issues, “working girl" is used and “endorphins” are linked with pain. It might be interesting to compare the sex Case experiences with Molly. Molly is depicted as a dominant, independent, competent woman. Such women are very common in contemporary action fiction. From a market point of view, is Gibson using her to entertain male readers?
Stone’s article talks a lot about the concept of “cyberspace” and With Neuromancer, William Gibson introduced the world to cyberspace. Today, cyberspace can refer to the Internet, "the Matrix,", or any space of “pure communication, the free market of symbolic exchange… of exotic sensuality mediated by exotic technology” (33). Don’t forget Gibson wrote Neuromancer almost 20 years ago, so I really appreciate his vision and creativity. He creates a complex future for us, but it is unbelievably believable. In the novel, Case roams through the cyberspace like a cowboy and I am interested to know his ending. Before reading this novel, I had never read a true science-fiction novel. I love it. And I know I will need to read it more than once to really understand it, which is ok to me.
Works Cited
Gibson, William. Neuromancer. New York: Ace Books, 1984.
Stone, Allucguère Rosanne. The War of Desire and Technology at the Close of the Mechanical
Age. Cambridge, Mass: MIT Press, 1995.


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i too am having trouble digesting all of gibson's vocabulary-it's not like reading other books when you don't understand a word you just look it up in the dictionary. i do find it challenging but i think he forces us to use our imaginations and really think about things, which can be fun, i can't wait to see how others interpret some of the words he uses, it will make for some interesting discussion. i have read neuromancer already and am reading it again because of the language, i don't feel comfortable discussing it in detail because i didn't pay enough attention to the context in some areas, i assumed that some of the words would be explained later and they are not, so hopefully this time around things will become clearer.i agree that it is hard for us to conceptalize the kind of society in the book, it is comparable to the matrix movie, but there's a lot more left unsaid in this book about society than in handmaids tale. we discussed earlier inclass that all people are cyborgs, but i found myself thinking that the characters in neuromancer are more like how i would personally define a cyborg, especailly molly. the uses of technology in the book are amazing!!!

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In the HMT, the different types of people who are sent off to the Colonies are mentioned. And one group of people was referred to as "Gender Traitors", who consisted of men who stuck up for the rights of women. And while they would work in the Colonies, some of them were forced to wear dresses in order to humiliate them. I found this interesting because some people think that men can't be feminist or if they are a feminist it means they're gay or something ridiculous like that. Also, if there were Gender Traitors, could there also have been Race Traitors in Gilead society? Racial issues are rarely mentioned in the HMT.

Yesterday's discussion made me challenge my pro-life beliefs. I don't want to start an abortion debate, just because those seem to go nowhere. But the discussion did make me realize the types of problems and issues pregnant women have to deal with and how limited their freedoms become.

While reading Neuromancer last night, I found it to be somewhat confusing. Mostly because of the names and references to hi-tech devices. The book also reminds me of the movie "The Matrix". And I believe that this has given me a better understanding of the movie, which I had to watch 4-5 times to finally understand it. I also found it interesting that parts of the book take place in Japan, because many of the electronic devices that we use were first made in Japan or improved on there. Plus Japanese culture seems to be more hi-tech than American culture as well.

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Wow. My response to Neuromancer is almost identical to Nicholas'! I also immediately thought of the film "The Matrix". Everytime he said the word matrix, I kept thinking of the matrix in the movie. I think that may have taken me off track of what the matrix really is in the book. Anybody know what it is in the book anyway? I also was confused about the cobra. I didn't even realize it was a whip right away. The use of medical advancement in the book really placed me into a futuristic setting. Gibson makes this portion of the story seem realistic and obvious to the reader about time period. But, I have to say I really feel like I'm dragging along in this book. In comparison to HMT, I can see how this is more of a technilogical text, but it seems a lot more boring. I feel like i'm choking each page down and constantly making an effort to remain awake. Also, what is the meaning of a "coffin" in this book? I don't think I ever figured that out. I just keep thinking of this vampire crawling into a coffin everytime the word is mentioned. Maybe it's the use of certain terms that is keeping me off track with this story.

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I found the beginning of Neuromancer to be a litte overwhelming at first but after the first thirty pages or so it became a lot easier to take in. When I read this I immediately thought of the movie "The Matrix" and lost a lot of respect for the writers of that movie. It was tough trying to put together all the new technology and futuristic images that Gibsaon tries to decribe. I am still trying to get an image of what a 'Cobra' whip looks like exactly. And there is all the technology that goes into Case's 'deck' and the stuff used for the Sense/net raid that is all jargon to me but I was still able to get a handle on the basics of the tools they use. Gibson's ideas of the technology of the future are incredible I wondered briefly where he got some of his ideas from (if anywhere). Gibson is good at making all the things that they use in the novel so far believable and conceivable. The technology is a little complicated but that only it makes it more believable. What intrigued me most was the ability to gene splice, and switch body parts and just the medical advances altogether. They seemed so realistic and it got me wondering if Gibson's vision of medicine in the future would ever come close to that because of all the things so far the new wave medicine and use of the body as a machine (i.e. eye implants) came the closest to our eventual medical evolution.

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Before reading the Balsamo article and listening to the class discussion today I hadn't thought of a lot of the attention that pregnant women get as a negative thing. It's become very engrained in our society. We really give pregnant women no privacy and, as someone mentioned already, if a women doesn't accept this attention she's seen as a bitch. I know I would not be comfortable with strangers coming up and wanting to touch my stomach when i'm pregnant. You wouldn't think of going up and touching on a strangers stomach when they are not pregnant. Why should it make any difference. It is still that woman's body. But what is frightening is that groups like anti-choice (or pro-lifers) groups take the public pregnancy to an extreme and it's almost as if the woman exists only as a womb for that fetus. I completely agree with what Maria said about losing the right to choose and the question she presented as well. Who gets to judge which is more important? The fetus or the woman carrying the fetus?

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When I first read the Balsamo article, I thought it was a little extreme. However, when I think about cases like the ones that were presented in class today, I realize that it is absolutely true. People feel it is their right and perhaps even their responsibility to govern the way that pregnant women conduct themselves. The part of the article that I fouind to be most frightening was the insinuation that the fetus inside the woman is perhaps more important than the woman carrying the fetus. The reason that scares me is because it seems to ring true in the arguments of many anti-abortionists. It is a scary thing when you no longer matter, but your body (or something inside of it) does. I don't want to start an abortion debate or anything, but the loss of control is the scariest part about the thought of losing our right to choose. If the pregnant woman is not important but her fetus is, then how far off are we really from the handmaids tale?

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i really enjoyed today's class discussion. involving accounts from around the world really aid in assuming this could happen to us. gilead is not so far fetched as it first seemed. in relating balsamo's article and hmt i can also relate a personal account. when my sister was pregnant she felt very much like a spectacle. first, because she was a young mother, second she was unmarried and third she is beautiful and was even more so while pregnant. people were always touching her belly. she hated it but took the torture because she didn't want to seem bitchy or ungrateful for the attention. she even proved balsamo's eroticism of the pregnant woman: once while at work a man actually hit on her and used flattery aimed at her pregnancy. she wasn't flattered, she was disgusted that a man (a stranger) would be so rude. even while she was giving birth i noticed a few extra nurses in the room just standing there watching. somewhere the magic of having a baby is lost when there are eyes looking at you from every direction and fixed on the part of the body also known as "the privates". atwood made the birth day seem a bit more intimate than today's procedure. i saw janine's labor as motivation for the other handmaids. another sign, like the hanging dead, in gilead that says, "this could be you."

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Balsamo's article and Lilian's presentation have me thinking about the pregnant body as spectacle. In reading the article, I realize that I am guilty of placing my gaze on the pregnant body. One of my best friends is five weeks away from giving birth. Every time I talk to her, I bombard her with questions about how it feels to be pregnant, what changes she is feeling, and so on. I don't ask these questions to make her feel like a spectacle--they honestly stem from curiosity. As a woman who plans to be pregnant and give birth at some point, I feel compelled to ask my friend these questions. However, after reading Balsamo's article, I am much more aware of how often I do this not only to my friend, but to other women as well. As stated before I don't mean any harm to the women I gaze at, wonder about, etc., and I don't intend to deconstruct their bodies into wombs. Instead, as a women who has never been pregnant, I share in the "wonder" of child birth when I see pregnant women. Balsamo's article has made me aware that I am sharing in the process of making a private pregnancy public. I am wondering if anyone else has experienced this "gaze". If so, how do you feel about your (unknowing) participation in the process of rendering the pregnant body spectacle?

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Two things stand out to me in reading Balsomo's "Public Pregnancies." One is her critique of radical feminists' "vehement denouncement of reproductive technologies," (Balsomo 86); and the other is the obscurity of male responsibility in the production of defect babies - those "male-mediated defects" (Balsomo 102).
Not immersed in the strong polemics of radical feminists, I fail to catch Atwood's criticism of the possible, horrible effects if radical feminists' total repudiation of reproductive technology is to be realized, such as the denial of use of anesthetics to women in labor. The development of reproductive technology is predominantly patriarchal in nature. Moreover, it seeks to control the maternal body, subjugating the rights of the maternal body against patriarchal intervention of male physicians and state organs, sometimes on the pretext of fetal rights. In fighting against such oppressive control and surveillance of the maternal body, feminists shall not go to another extreme of completely wiping out reproductive technologies and male doctors. They produce beneficial results for women. The imaging technologies can discover abnormal fetus. Other screening technologies can detect if the fetus has other diseases can seek to terminate diseased pregnancy before it is too late or is born. Such screening technologies are good for the mother, for the baby, the family, and for the society as a whole. And for women whose physical features make them unable to give natural birth, surgery ensures both the health of the mother and the baby. Otherwise, they both die.
The reproductive technologies and male physicians are to be strongly opposed when the doctors abuse the technology in disregard of the rights of the pregnant woman. The rights of the expectant mother must be guaranteed as a prerequisite before other considerations can be entertained, such as the rights of the fetus. The U.S. insistence of the rights of the fetus puts the cart before the horse, because a maltreated, abused mother often would not care for the fetus. The right of the mother is the field where feminists shall fight.
Absence of male responsibility in the culture is reflected in the novel's ironic rhetoric that there does not exist a term of "male sterility." The patriarchal culture problematizes the maternal body only, attributing birth defects to the unruly maternal body. This is another field that feminists should fight to disclose.

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am i the only person who did not get closure from the historical notes?!!! i did find them helpful in that they cleared some things up but i am not certain they learned any lessons. the main speaker laughs at women and the handmaids tale two or three times in his speech, i thought the historical notes were as disturbing as the rest of the book.as we were discussing yesterday the chapter divisions, we see that the narrator did not divide the tapes into sections named night, nap shopping, etc. i wonder if the text would be drastically altered if we read the book in the sequence the narrator spoke it, i think it is very significant that these two guys just put the tapes in order they thought was correct, knowing so little about gilead.

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Lillian Liang
Professor Blackmon
English 360K
May 28 2003
I’d like to continue the discussion of the several points we have already covered in class in here. Offred’s life can be divided into: 1) the past, when she lived in the States in the 1970s and 1980s; 2) the present, in Gilead. It seems like in the past, women are bold and confident, as depicted in women’s magazines, but in the present, the Handmaids are infantilized. So can we say that the pre-Gilead era is a time of freedom and choice for women while the present is a time of male domination and sexual exploitation? I guess not, because that would render the novel too simplistic.
“In the days of anarchy, it was freedom to. Now you are being given freedom from. Don’t underrate it” (24). It is easy to understand “freedom to”, but “freedom from” what? I think here the Handmaids are told that they have “freedom from” sexual violence, rape, etc, which existed in the past. And although other women think the Handmaids dirty (Somewhere in the novel we are told Offred is shunned.), they are told to think themselves as pearls.
This leads to the gaze theory in Balsamo’s article. Yes, traditionally pregnant women are gazed upon, are seen as erotic emblems, and in the novel the Handmaids are also cast in the public gaze. But the gaze here is nothing full of wonder and intention, and on the contrary, it is negative: it diminishes them, and renders them unseen. If in a conventional society women need to be objectified first to be seen, in here, women are both objectified and unseen. This is why in the novel the mirror image surfaces quite a lot.
Another issue that provokes my thinking in yesterday’s discussion is the fatherly role of the Commander. I agree that he protects Offred and we do see the evidences in the text that the Commander takes on the role of the father, but in the end “He looks worried and helpless, but already withdrawing from me [Offred], distancing himself. Whatever else I am to him, I am also at this point a disaster” (294). This reminds me that quite often we are also told that Offred is only a “whim” to him. What does “whim” mean? Why does Commander want her? She is special, she behaves like a pet, or he is bored with Serena or “men are just sex machines”, as mentioned in the novel? But whatever it is, wouldn’t the fatherly image of him render the Ceremony scene an incest drama, because we have the sexually victimizing father on the one hand and sexually abused daughter on the other? That is why I agree the teacher comment that the Commander belies what he claims.
And this leads to another issue: what role does Serena Joy play in this “incest” scene, if readers are carried along with me? And also, if Atwood purposely gives Offred a father, why Offred lacks mother’s love or care or whatever it is although she has a real mother? What role does her real mother play in her life? Mothers are supposed to be part of kids’ school, but her mother is away from her physically and emotionally. We know that her mother is a radical feminist whose professional goal is to fight for women in general, but Offred tells Moira: “I thought she was dead” and Moira answers: “She might as well be … You should wish it for her” (252). What does Atwood want to convey to us with this feminist character?
This leads us to think about Moira, another rebel in the novel. We are told toward the end that “[Moira] is frightening me [Offred] now, because what I hear in her voice is indifference, a lack of volition. Have they really done it to her then, taken away something ---what---? That used to be so central to her?” (249) To come back to the freedom issue, is this what Atwood wants to imply by “freedom from”, if we can transplant the Gilead world to our contemporary society? Is she trying to say that this kind of freedom is also something to be wary of, because freedom is also dangerous essentially?

Works Cited
Atwood, Margaret. The Handmaid’s Tale. New York: Anchor Books, 1998.



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I agree with Loretta on her comments about the salvagings and the prayvaganzas...I don't see them as being technologized, but they are most definitely a part in this religion that the Gilead society has accepted...however, I wonder if maybe there's point to that...maybe by this part of their beliefs not being technologized, Atwood is making a statement that this society's religion is not a religion at all...it just uses the term religion to make control easier...if people believe that what they are doing is in the name of God, then they would have less reservations about it...just like with the salvagings...the women hosting it had no problems watching the bodies...yet the Handmaids all felt sick...Is this another commentary that since the Handmaids had the inside knowledge about the ones being hung that they are the only ones who truly are able to break out if they wanted? To leave this "religion"...?

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I have to say that I was dissapointed with the ambiguous ending of the novel, however as Abby indicated, the historical notes do provide some closure. As I finished the book, I wondered what the significance of Offred's mother and Moira were in a deeper sense. Perhaps Moira stood for the hope Offred had to escape the lifestyle she had been subjected to. For instance, when she met her for the last time at the 'club' she started to feel a little nervous with the fact that Moira seemed to have lost her resistance and simply gave in to the life she had been trying to escape. Also, why continue to think of her mother throughout the whole of the story? Did it signify her feelings of guilt? Perhaps for not listening to her? Spending more time with her? The fact that Offred noticed her in the film at the Red Center as an activist and Moira had seen her in a film displaying the colonies might imply that even the strong are eventually broken down. But, the fact that she is only seen in films might imply her presence as being distant, not real, a dream (perhaps?). I guess this is my question. What is the role of Offred's mother throughout the story (or her memory anyway)? What effect does it have on Offred?

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In response to Wendell's confusion on the significance of the female body with regards to public pregnancies I think Balsamo is making the point that the state of being pregnant has a different set of cultural constructions that due to reproductive technology are being ascribed to all women who may have potentially pregnant bodies. My point is that once a woman is pregnant and certainly when her pregnancy becomes physically noticeable she is no longer regarded as an autonomous individual. The human body is a "physical manifestation." This is what we talked about in class as being sex. However, social construction of gender has different consequences for the pregnant woman and she is thus deconstructed by these cultural notions.
Although I see Balsamo's argument for religion being technologized while reproduction is ritualized (p. 86) in Atwood's novel, I don’t see enough evidence for this assertion. I definitely agree that the ceremony and birth day rituals characterize reproduction, but events such as salvaging and prayvaganzas (which I don’t see as technologized) are also rituals that define the Gilead religion.
In response to Samantha's comment on my blog concerning Native American women and literacy: I see your (counter)point. Literacy may not truly or may I say accurately give us a voice. Being able to read and write does not ensure being heard. However, in our society history is a patriarchal construction that includes written accounts but dismisses oral accounts (especially with respect to Native Americans). Sometimes to beat the system you have to work within the system. Thus the history of women, African Americans, Native Americans and others may be brought to light through writing and reading. Although, everyone may not become so readily aware of these added histories their existence counteracts the complete male domination of history. Also, in today's world we acquire a considerable amount of knowledge through reading, thus these "new" historical accounts are a means of communicating knowledge that may otherwise not be known.

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I finished HTM and I really found the historical notes important to the whole novel. It gives the reader some closure that the country did not survive living in a Gilead society. It also gave the reader hope that the protagonist sent a message out about the ways of this society. I also have to agree with Wendell's comment yesterday, that the society seemed to be bad for everyone. The men had desires to have the women back in a variety of ways. These men thought that this would be perfect and they are the ones sneaking around trying to get a taste of what it was like before. I also feel like when Offred is really transforming is when she starts to have a relationship with Nick and when she finds out what happens to Offglen. She starts to see that this is who she is now. A cyborg of this society. She realizes that this is the best that it is going to get for her.Everyone in the society including the men, wives, handmaids, etc were sneaking around trying to be more like they used to be in the time before. It would be interesting to read about the deconstruction of this Gilead.

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I was really confused in the begining of the reading for Wed. with Jainie. Was she brain washed, when she said "Hello, I'm Jainie...". Or was she just upset about what had happpened to her baby?

posted by Emily at 11:53 AM


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ok i don't think i understand, the significance of the female body.
for example they talk on page 80 of the public pregnancies about how easily the female body is deconstructed

I guess i just always sort of thought of the human body as physical manifestation of a more abstract conscience


posted by wendell at 7:22 AM


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Ok, having just now found Professor Blackmon's response to my working definition of what a cyborg is...I would like to expand on that having now finished THT...What I feel the stress should be on with the issue of cyborg in regards to this novel is the fluidity of what cyborg is...according to Haraway (correct?) a cyborg should be able to change, to be fluid...not stagnant...It doesn't necessarily mean in what we would think of as a positive way, however...for example...Offred is cyborg--going off her ability to change--because she has had to change...she has had to adapt to her new surroundings, she has been fluid...however, her fluidity has become rigid due to the harsh rules she must follow...her mind has not been allowed to expand further, therefore she finds certain things shocking that would never have phased her before...Offred goes from being able to change, to being less adaptable...if that makes sense...(sorry all, it's early)

Also, I would like to comment on Amy's blog about Offred's real name...That's a really good guess...You're right, that's the only name we don't find again...I bet you're right...or at least it's a really good assumption!

posted by Eileen at 2:20 AM


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i have yet to finish the novel, but what i have read so far is very intriguing. i imagine a world similar to offglen's and shudder at the thought of any one having so much control over my life. i am surprised that atwood doesn't put more power into offglen's hands at this point. like jane says, the story really illustrates racism, religious fanaticism and male oppression. what was it about non-whites that made whites want to erase those populations? can we make any references to current topics that would lead us to that decision? we have seen examples of religious fanaticism - you all remember david koresh in waco or charles manson? granted those didn't work as widespread as gilead, but why is gilead exempt from such a future? we see how offglen has thought of murder or running away but she never does it. why? is she really receiving drugs as she suspects? the most interesting detail in the novel is the ceremony. why isn't it counted as adultery? because the wife is present? because it's for the good of mankind? i suppose if artificial insemination were the method, the men would have to masturbate, and that's a no no, too. today in class samantha asked who is a cyborg in the novel. i say everyone. they are all machines used to fuel an economy. in those terms i guess we are all cyborgs too. right? every person has a place and every place has a purpose. also like jane, i don't see the idea of us all being cyborgs as outlandish as i thought at the beginning of the course. i hope that the two other books will help me expand on the concept furthur. i am excited to finish this book, which i plan to do right now.

posted by jamie at 11:27 PM


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I think the Handmaid's Tale illustrates the dangers of racism, religious fanaticism, and male oppression. There is no separation of church and state in Gilead; rather, it is a male-governed theocracy, and the subjugation of women is justified by biblical scripture. I myself am a Christian, but am perfectly willing to admit that religious fanaticism - sadly - is not entirely unknown to Christianity (the Spanish Inquisition and the Crusades, for instance). Atwood uses this Gileadean society to imagine an extreme, almost Puritanical fanaticism; that there are religious fanatics of nearly any and every religion is thus not to be denied. Christianity, like Islam, is susceptible to fanaticism, whenever there are those who rigidly interpret the text deemed as sacred, and suffer those who share different beliefs to adhere to their own.


posted by Jane at 4:07 PM


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The idea I had originally conceived of a cyborg wad a dehumanized creature, half organism, half machine - the fusion of flesh and blood with mechanism. I also had in mind the image of the Borg from "Star Trek," and recalled that oft-repeated line: "You will be assimilated. Resistance is futile." Thus, my conception was of a cold, calculating creature, the mindless mechanism of which had replaced a human heart. I envisioned a futuristic world in which man was conquered by machine, to the detriment of all our innate human nature. Now, however, my conception has broadened, and the notion that we are now, in essence, cyborgs, no longer seems outlandish. The cyborg has not conquered man; rather, man and machine are symbiotically linked. As Haraway states: "A cyborg world might be about lived social and bodily realities in which people are not afraid of their joint kinship with animals and machines" (A Cyborg Manifesto, 154). Mankind may not, as yet, be interfaced with the wiring and circuitry of technology, but it is strongly dependent upon it. Our close and frequent interaction with technology forms an almost inextricable link between man and machine, much as a mechanically interfaced prosthesis would. The tools we use become extensions of ourselves. I know that when I write, imprinting my thoughts with the written word, I feel that my pen has become an extension of my very being. There seems to be a fluidity of motion between my inner thoughts and their outward representation. Thus, the notion that mankind is evolving into the cyborg may not be as farfetched as it at first might sound.

posted by Jane at 3:37 PM


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In this part of the novel, the author expands the form of writing history to voice, so women still possess the power of writing one's history - "when I get out of here, if I'm ever able to set this down, in any form, even in the form of one voice to antohter, it will be a reconstruction then too, at yet another remove" (HMT 134). In that world, they are denied access to the written word. Therefore, they always communicate in whispers and silent body signs. They still possess the way to resist such totalitarian body and spiritual control.
Yet, during the process of resisting male control, it is important that women should enlist whatever support they can from males, even though those males harbor their own motives for rendering women help. The Commander let the Handmaid into the power of letters for his own amusement, but the Handmaid can utilize his motives and turn the table around - "We can always look it up in the dictionary, he said. He said we. The first time, I realized, he'd let me win" (HMT 156). Because the Commander still appreciates the old times when women possess the freedom to go anywhere they wished to go and did anything they liked, women should enlist men's sympathy to resist, though scanty such sympathy may be - "Some of us, he said, retain an appreciation for the old things" (HMT 157).
The rationale behind this strategy is that it is impossible to create a women-only enclave, referring to the lesbian alternative some feminists might have entertained. To change the world, women have to deal with men - "I said there was one way of living with your haed in the sand and that if Moira thought she could create Utopia by shuttering herself up in a women-only enclave she was sadly mistaken. Men were not just going to go away, I said. You couldn't just ignore them" (HMT 172). Women's strategy is to undermine men's power individually, like the subtle power of the Handmaid over the commander. As a collective, women's strategy is networking, to be united - "And networks. Networking, one of mother's old phrases, musty slang of yesteryear" (HMT 202). Offglen belongs to the network of Underground Femaleroad. So does Nick. The survival of the story indicates the Handmaid has survived. Otherwise, the reader could not have the story.

posted by xianfeng at 12:51 PM


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I feel the same as many of you do about the scariness of the novel and the possibility of such a society in today’s world. Of course I believe one of Margaret Atwood’s points was to scare people into thinking bout society. The “Historical Notes” puts another spin on Atwood’s message. There are good times and bad times, Gilead definitely representing a bad time because of all of the oppressed people involved. But Atwood also implies that nothing lasts forever, governments and state boundaries change as well as our analysis, construction, and reconstruction of history.
Wendell mentioned the oddity of the “mating” ritual. I think maybe the men in pre-Gilead society were angry about women’s sexual freedom: the freedom to enjoy sex, chose partners (who may not even be men)…so what it all came down to was power and thus control. I agree, it doesn’t seem to be anyone’s “ideal” version of sex, but it’s not like the men are stuck with the ceremony. Their power and control has allowed them to create an alternate sexual outlet that is very similar to men’s clubs in “the time before.” (I’m referring to the Jezebel section, pages 229-225)
I think one thing we need to keep in mind when analyzing the text is the fact that HMT is autobiographical. Offred tells her story not that of the whole Gilead society. For instance we don’t know what the lives of econowives and their husbands are like.
To Samantha: I just read your comment on my first blog…I’ll think about that and post a response.

posted by loretta at 12:51 PM


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Lillian Liang
Professor Blackmon
English 360K
May 27 2003
The main argument of this paper is in the big para on page 115, somewhere in the middle.
It is very clear and logical, much easier than the first article about cyborg. I don’t have many arguments that I can argue against him. The article is divided into several parts: each part with a subheading. I am going to talk about section by section until page 38. Cat is going to talk about the rest.
The author starts by saying that “Pregnant women… can not easily avoid the scrutiny of a fascinated gaze” (80). This gaze basically means that pregnant woman “becomes an eroticized spectacle, the visual emblem of the sexual woman” (80) and “the state of being pregnant is so “wondrous”. But the author also says that “our magical thinking about reproduction” is “culturally determined” (80). So what looks “wondrous” (80) in one culture may look ordinary in another, or what look erotic for women may look nothing unusual for men. I remember I heard a guy said to a bunch of us once that he found it hard to develop an interest in any pregnant woman, no matter how pretty she looked. I am not generalizing here, but I mean our mind sets are really “culturally determined” (80). But Balsamo also mentions even though a pregnant woman looks erotic, this is not exactly something to wonder and marvel at, because “the female body is deconstructed into its culturally significant parts and pieces: here the womb serves as a metonym for the entire body. … Not only does this fragmentation culturally reduce a woman to an objectified pregnant body, it also supports the naturalization of the scientific management of fertilization, implantation, and pregnancy more broadly” (81). I am quoting this not only to suggest woman’s body is objectified but also want to ask a question. We talked about reproduction is a technology last time, so do all the different stages of the reproduction work together to make the whole process a technology? Or each stage itself constitutes a technology? If, say, fertilization alone is a technology, I mean, if fertilization alone without necessary producing pregnancy is also a technology, then we can say, sex is also a technology. But I can comfortably accept that reproduction is a technology, but when it comes to sex is a technology, I need to think twice.
On page 83, Balsamo gives us a summary of “the five classes of women in Gilead regime. Wives, econowives, aunts, marthas, and handmaids”. He continues with “Two other classes of women exist: ‘Jezebels,’ women who are used as unofficial prostitutes at the military club; and un-women, the women who resist their class assignment, are nonfunctional for the society” (84). This classification is crucial to our understanding of the novel.
From page 84 through 86, the author talks about different rituals in that society and these include: The Ceremony, Testifying, Birthday, Salvaging, Mandatory monthly visit to the gynecologist to determine her fertility status, etc. Things these rituals have in common include: first, they destruct individual identity and construct collective identity, remember how the female protagonist longs for privacy; second, the public rituals, working together with the private moment when she visits the Commander and when she has affairs with Nick, demoralize the handmaids. The first analysis is obvious, but the second, to juxtapose the public and private and show the demoralizing effect, is a very good analysis. I like that.
But I like most here is on page 86, Balsamo points out “Atwood inverts the contemporary association between religion and ritual on the one side, and reproduction and technology on the other, so that in her novel religion is technologized and reproduction is highly ritualized and radically detechnologized” (86).
This is really exciting to me. First, it ties well with what Balsamo says later on that “the 15 chapters, …alternate between chapters titled “Night” or “Nap” and chapters that describe the focal rituals of the Gileadean society” (84). I remember we haven’t worked into the chapter headings so far, so this could be a starting point. Can we interpret it that night or nap signify reproduction, and these alternate with chapters about daily rituals?
Second, this reminds me the blurring of all those boundaries between man and animal, man and machine, body and mind, nature and culture in the cyborg world we have learned earlier on.
But before I agree with Balsamo, I need to verify his assumption first. I took course “defining china” last semester in history dept. and we read quite a few articles about rituals. I took these articles out this morning. Smith’s article uses ritual in Chinese culture to examine the relationship between cultural unity and cultural diversity”. He uses a quotation in the article “Through ritual, the positions of honorable and lowly are fixed, intimate and distant are separated, Heaven is served above, Earth is served below, ancestors are respected, and sovereigns and teachers are glorified… In the end, ritual is what distinguishes men from beasts” (281). So his basic point is that “ritual facilitates the rectification, solidification, and standardization of customs, and hence the restoration or maintenance of social harmony” (283). Sometimes “rituals created a solidary community that cut across other social boundaries” (Rawski 264). And now in the cyborg world and also in this novel, rituals don’t take these functions any more because rituals themselves are blurred with others.
The article goes on and talk about incorporation of technology into all fields of medicine, and some people critique that use of reproductive technologies “embody and institutionalize the patriarchal domination of women and of the scientifically managed reproduction” and some argue that whether or not reproductive technologies may not be inherently patriarchal. His conclusion in this section is that if we say, “technological devices, specialized knowledge, scientific practices” (96) are culturally determined, then “the mass-mediated narratives about the relationship between women’s bodies, technologies of surveillance, and threats to public health” (97) determine the meaning of new productive technologies. He is using examples from popular media to prove that and Cat has a lot to say about this next time. It is a great Southern tradition to tell tales.

Works Cited
Balsamo, Anne Marie. Technologies of the Gendered Body: Reading Cyborg Women. Durham:
Duke UP, 1996.
Rawski, Evelyn. The Last Emperors: A Social History of Qing Imperial Institution. Beverley:
University of California Press, 1998.
Smith, Richard J. “Ritual in Ch’ing Culture”. 281-310. (I am working on this away from home and that copy of the essays collection which contains this article is not at hand, so I am omitting the latter part of the bibliographical information for this entry.)



posted by lillian at 11:05 AM


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I think that, obviously, the men are in control of the situation, or actually, the old white men are in control. And, of course, there is a certain heirarchy that the people must follow which is something that cannot be avoided in society (or has not yet). We have discussed how the new government is persecuting other religious factions, including the Jewish, as well as the african americans and of course the handmaids are treated horribly no matter what kind of propaganda is layed out by the government but I think that the bigger picture or the biggest picture is the overall loss of everyone's freedom in the novel. If you think about it no one is getting 'the good life' except for maybe the commander's (even they have to hide to play scrabble) but even they still fall under the strict regulations of the government. It seems that everyone is scared or is aware of the fact that their position is not permanent. The complete loss of ALL freedom seems to me to be the big picture and it is just articulated through one of the worst positions to have, the handmaid's.

posted by Nicholas at 10:58 AM


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I think the scariest thing about this novel is that there is a possibility that it could happen today. We would have mass chaos if the entire govt. were killed and then all of a sudden an army takes over. This is exactly why so many people defend our right to possess guns. In a modern situation like this, we would not be able to defend ourselves in any other way. Think of how quickly they could do the same to women in our future (or any other minority for that matter). The reliance on mechanical banking etc... was also a cause for the downfall. Leaving everything to be computerized caused women to lose control of their assets/money. Think of how much we depend on computerized accounts for our own money, ATM machines, online account balancing, etc.... It's scary. Perhaps we should be warned by this novel, just as others on the blog have indicated already.

posted by Laura at 10:54 AM


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i think i figured out offred's real name, it's june. i hate refering to her as offred so i looked throughout the book for the names listed on page three, all of them appear as she tells the story, except june. i thought maybe everyone would like to know. tell me if you find i'm wrong.

i'm in agreement with everyone that this story is definitely a warning. i think we should look to june's mother- throughout the book she says that we take things for granted and she seems angry at the way the younger generation (who didn't have to fight for their freedom) doesn't seem to think that things could revert back to the hard times she endured. she has tasted oppression and i think she forsees and is afraid of what lies ahead for her daughter and granddaughter. this is a direct message to us that we continue to fight for and appreciate our rights.

posted by amy at 10:24 AM


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One would think that men would enjoy the independence that is created by having women being less dependent on them. But instead, it makes men feel threatened and useless just because they're no longer the bread winners of the household or are the head decision makers. Plus their purpose of providing sperm for reproduction uses is being threatened as well, since fewer women are deciding to have babies. But basically men are threatened because their gender role of being male is changing. Even though HMT may portray men in a negative way, not all the men in it are that sexist. For example, the Commander is shown as being sympathetic towards women by the way he treats Offred. He is also quite liberal with his wife. He lets her smoke, drink, and cuss. I think that the Commander doesn't like the way this society is set up, but he just goes along with it because he has to or else he could be persecuted.

posted by Amanda at 9:24 AM


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In response to how, the men are portrayed in this novel; it is perhaps a bit one-dimensional. I think that in general the men in HMT are just oblivious to the women around them, the whole system reeks of something set up by men, who have no idea what they have done or how it will impact so many people.
The thing that I think is important to point out is that the men’s lives suck also, for example it seems odd to me that all these perfectly ok (I don’t have better word for this) like Nick guys have to wait to be promoted up to rank high enough such that they can marry or have any other interaction with women. A related thing to this is why did they design the mating ritual as they did. I mean it is difficult to imagine that that ritual is anybodies idealized version of sex.
Another thing that bothers me is the only people that we see going any work are servants there appears to be nothing new, old us army blankets, old clothing and such things are every where, and I suppose it is nice from an environmental prospective is nice to see so much reused J, but the social costs are too high.
As far as politics go, isn’t this why books like Animal Farm, 1984, Brave New World, The Giver, HMT other distopic novels are taught to sever as a warning. It is just my opinion that many things lie in the balance, and little one way and we would slip in to chaos, and a bit the other way we would be in a totalitarian regime.

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What Eileen brings up is interesting...I, too, am interested in how the men of the class are responding to the ways in which men are portrayed in the novel. Do you feel that the work is one-sided in regards to men, or does it offer several different roles that men can take on--both positive and negative? I would love to hear about how some of you feel about this.

I also find it interesting that we are picking up on the uncanny resemblance that some of the politics in the novel have with our politics of today. Is it viable that a society such as the one that appears in the HMT could be put into effect today? I don't have the answer, but it is fascinating and somewhat scary to think about. Part of me wants to believe that we as a society are progressive enough to not let something like that occur, but another part of me sees aspects of this society in our own. The society in the novel seems to have regressed--like it was mentioned in class earlier, it seems like a society of the past, not one that we would think of occuring in the future.

posted by Tory at 12:14 AM


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My thoughts were similar to Maria's when reading HMT. I kept wondering how people would react to something like this if it happened today. Would we just agree because everyone is so scared about our national safety? They basically shot anyone who protested what they were doing. That would be a very big deterent to putting up much resistance. On the other hand the US goes into other countries and changes their way of life "for their own good." Where do we draw the line? What is o.k. and done for our safety and what is too extreme? Why is it ok for the US to impose their ways on other countries but if anyone tried to change the way of life in the US, riots would break out? Americans are so accustomed to the rights we are given (even though it seems as if some citizens of this country have more than others at times) that it is interesting to think about how we would react. Many of the rights that our ancestors fought (and some died) for would just vanish in a matter of seconds. Do you think that this transition (or some variation of it) could really take place? Would it go over that easily?

posted by Shana at 11:29 PM


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It is always a controversial to bring up politics, but when I was reading the flashback to how this new government took over, I was really freaked out by some of the parallels to modern politics, suchs a the references to terrorism and making political decisions based on national security. It is almost unbelieveable that this was published in 1986 but has so many references that hold true for us. This novel could be a bit of a wake up call to us, a warning to not let ourselves be controlled just so that we can feel safe. Although it is extreme, you have to ask yourself what you would do if all of a sudden you were fired from your job and your bank card stopped working. I think the scariest thing about this is how easy it was for the "new regime" to take over. Do you think that is realistic?

posted by Maria at 10:50 PM


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I would like to comment on what Tory said about the patriarchy fearing female bondings...this was why the new "regime" was formed...the commander states at one of his meetings with Offred that the world changed because men had nothing left to do...so basically this take over was in response to feeling subordinate to women...the women didn't necessarily need men anymore...they saw the power as having shifted, and revolted...I found that interesting...

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I've been finishing up the Handmaid's Tale and I have found its reading to be stifling...maybe I'm the only one...but whenever I take a break from reading, I feel almost as she would...I have this semi-fear that I'm doing something wrong...it's like the sensation that you get when you step off an elevator...you feel as if you are still moving, even though you aren't...Am I the only one who is getting this sensation? I'm also interested in how the men of the class are feeling as they are reading this...do you feel sort of set back as well? Just curious....

posted by Eileen at 5:53 PM


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I cannot put HTM down,yet I am very disturbed by the situation as well as some other things. I want the main character to tell more about her past and what else is going on in the world now. I really want to know where her daughter is. I am frustrated that the women are not reaching out to one another to at least form a small community within the household. It makesme think of Haraway's article, when she says that, "There is nothing about being female that naturally binds women"(155). It seems that this whole new way of life is full of hatred and command. I am only to the section that we were supposed to read up to so I am not sure what will happen with the women, but I wish they would form a bond. There is nothing positive about a society without choices. The commander does not even seems happy with the circumstances. I don't understand how the women can feel animosity toward each other when none of them want the roles that they have anyway.

posted by Abby at 12:16 PM


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Amy poses an interesting point when suggesting that a need or desire for community helps the patriarchs hold power. In what ways can we disrupt this? Or, in what ways is this idea already being disrupted? This might entail constructed, assembling, deconstructing a new definition of community. In the HMT the women create a sort of community even though they are prohibited from having friendships. I think that this shows the power of communities--specfically female communities in this case. Because the patriarchy fears the bonds of friendship among women, it can be assumed that they fear what may result from those friendships--i.e., an uprising, retaliation, networks, etc. However, it is interesting that these communities find a way of being created even in oppressive circumstances. It is almost like a human survival mechanism. The presence of these communities in societies like the one explore in HMT demonstrate the power that can be accessed through communal efforts.

posted by Tory at 3:44 PM


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i agree with amanda when she talks about the hypocritical society in HMT, it's disturbing and should make us look at the hypocracy in our own patriarchal society.

something i thought of in class yesterday: we discussed the human need for community, i think this need really helps the patriarchs hold power. the patriarchal family unit is the basic unit of our society so it makes sense that our government should be patriarchal as well since we value family. in HMT the family unit as we know it is disrupted. women are expected to be machines, bearing children only to have them taken away, the childrens future rests on their sex. trouble arises in this first generation of handmaids when they resist being machines.


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